back toward Olivia with a slight edge in her voice. She didn't like to throw her weight around, but she felt the need to subtly remind Miss Poisson who was wearing the badge here. "What can you tell me about Doug Woolard?"

Olivia jerked as if she had stuck her finger on something sharp, and a brief look crossed her face; too brief to interpret if it had not been so intense. It was a look of absolute rage.

"Doug Woolard, did you say?" she asked, regaining her composure. Though her face was once more calm, her voice carried an undertone which seemed to ask, "Why do you speak of him as though he's still alive?"

"That's right," Judy affirmed, sensing that she was on the trail of a strong lead.

Olivia turned to her assistant. "Lillian, if you would?"

The younger skunk dipped at the waist. "Of course." She left the room swiftly, but without a sense of hurry – as if she were just naturally accustomed to moving quickly.

Miss Poisson looked back at Judy, her eyes looking as though they were barely holding back a raging inferno. "Woolard once worked for my father," she explained. "Lillian is bringing you his file now, but to be brief, he was one of our leading chemists, second only to my father and myself.  He was fired, and had the law allowed it we would have done much more."

"Why?" Judy leaned forward. "What did he do?"

Medusa herself would have withered at the sight of the skunk's scowl. "It is all in his file – including much which may be news to you at the ZPD, for reasons also detailed in the file."

"Sounds like a pretty thorough file," Judy remarked.

Olivia snorted and sat back, folding her arms. "I don't forget grievances such as he committed easily," she answered. "Nor do I forget favors – and I would consider it a personal one if, should you find Woolard, you would make his arrest as... unpleasant as possible."

Judy shook her head. "I don't modify arrest procedures," she replied. Then she thought back to the two times she had snagged Duke Weaselton. "Well, no more than I have to. I just do my job and bring 'em in."

"A pity," Olivia uttered under her breath. Then she turned her head as the door opened, and received the file from Lillian. She rose to her feet and crossed the room, looking like she was about to hand the folder to Judy.  She stopped, however, about three steps short.  "Understand," she said, her voice dead serious, "that the information in this file must not appear in any official case; I give it to you only if I have your word that none of it will be circulated."

Judy wasn't sure she could promise that, and she hesitated just a little.  "All ZPD report are confidential," she assured the skunk.

Olivia shook her head.  "You misunderstand.  This is for your use only, and by use I mean tracking down Woolard.  Do you understand?"

Judy nodded.  "Okay, I guess that's fair."

Olivia handed the folder to Judy. "This will get you started. I'll mail you the rest of what you've been promised as soon as possible." Glancing at the clock, she added, "Now if you have no objections, I have something to prepare for – and I am already behind schedule."

"Thank you," Judy replied with as much sincerity as she could fake. With that, she left.

Her products may eliminate odors, she thought to herself, but something here definitely stinks.

 

A short time later, back in Olivia's dressing room, the heiress voiced her thoughts to Lillian.

"If Judith Hopps wants to chase after Woolard, I can live with that. All the better if she brings him to justice – or as near as she dares. Still, I can't have interference with the family business, so I'll have to make certain she is satisfied with the information she gets."

Lillian said nothing, knowing that whatever she thought, this was a business matter to Olivia – and Olivia always won in the end when it came to business.

"Now then," said Olivia, studying herself in a mirror and making a few adjustments to her jewelry, "let's get back to the party. Enough unpleasantness for one evening, yes?"

This time, Lillian heartily agreed.

So, that's your start to my first Zootopia fanfic. What do you think?

Please read and review! Suggestions welcome.



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July 25, 2016
Usa Male
Thanks.

July 23, 2016
Usa Male
O' Cap'n My Cap'n!
This YouTube account can give you a solid introduction to the genre:

https://www.youtube.com/user/FilmNoirTV

July 23, 2016
Usa Male
lol No offense taken. Sounds like the sort of thing I would have previously dubbed "Norse"(since the Norse worldview was dominated by fate and ended with even most of their gods getting killed). Each to his own, I suppose.

Knowing what you've told me now, I've actually been angling for something of the "noir" persuasion for a while now. There will be later chapters where the tone is much more light-hearted and humorous, but rest assured, this will not be one of those stories where the good guys have it easy.

July 23, 2016
Usa Male
O' Cap'n My Cap'n!
A clarification: by that comparison, I didn't mean to infer that your fiction is pessimistic, Jack. I hope you understand that. Film noir is a very popular and engaging genre, and I happen to like it. Zootopia itself has a light film noir aspect to it as well. And there are literary versions of that genre. But pessimism would be considered one aspect of a film noir, or literary version thereof. So it isn't considered light, comedic or melodramatic, in other words. Just FYI.

July 23, 2016
Usa Male
O' Cap'n My Cap'n!
From the Oxford online English dictionary:

"FILM NOIR

[film nwar]
NOUN

A style or genre of cinematographic film marked by a mood of pessimism, fatalism, and menace. The term was originally applied (by a group of French critics) to American thriller or detective films made in the period 1944–54 and to the work of directors such as Orson Welles, Fritz Lang, and Billy Wilder. A film marked by a mood of pessimism, fatalism, and menace."

July 22, 2016
Usa Male
lol Thanks. I had a lot of fun writing it, because it's a break from my usual style - and I love caves and underground passages. Hearing it described as "noir" is kind of interesting for me, as I'm not familiar with the genre - but I guess I pegged it anyway.

Glad you liked the range of species I included; I've got a number of plans in that respect (I'm also a fan of nocturnal animals). I've heard quite a bit of feedback about Olivia in particular; there's actually a joke in her name which is a little clearer for people who've seen the show Loonatice Unleashed (or just for people who know some French). I'll probably make it a bit clearer later on.

July 22, 2016
Usa Male
O' Cap'n My Cap'n!
So, having read this first chapter of your story, I have to tell you that I really like the "film noir" feel of it, befitting not only certain characteristics of the original movie, but also of the underlying mystery of the nighthowlers. You've got a well-developed and keen writing structure for this sort of story concept, an it was easy to follow and engaging. And, of course, I like that you're setting the early elements of the story in the Noctural District, as I had mentioned to you before (and that you've included some new mammals, some of which are very distinct noctural species)! I really think you're on the right track here...and I look forward to seeing where it goes.

Miss Poisson. :icon300: An interesting name for the primary antagonist, and of making her a skunk.




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