through everything he was running from, meaning that he had to escape quickly; otherwise, the pirates would kill him for what he was about to do. He mentally prepared himself for the chase of his life.
His spirits rose when the small treasure chest Karnage clutched came into view. The chest alone could be worth something, but the jewel that he knew to be inside was worth a fortune. It was his ticket out of there.
Kit jumped, slightly startled, when Don Karnage cleared the table directly below him with one sweep of his arm. Charts, pens, and ink went flying onto the floor. The pirate captain then reverently placed the chest in the center of the rough wooden table.
“Riches, my men. Riches beyond your limited, insignificant dreams. But not beyond mine.” The pirate captain’s laugh held a hint of insanity. “For soon, I, Don Karnage, shall be the wealthiest man in the world!” Chortling, he spun around happily.
Here goes everything... Kit thought. Taking a deep breath, he kicked the vent grate open and jumped down into the room.
The End
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That's great to read; I like fanfics which are going into the past of
the characters. It's a good example of fanfic, because that's
something we will never see in any official product (the main
characters haven't met yet) I didn't notice any content that required a PG rating though... |
Btw, the reason why I rated it as PG was the scene where Karnage threatened to kill Kit.