Karnage is suppose to evil as he was in Plunder and Lightning since he is out for revenge. It is great there is romance in the story since it is about time Baloo proposes to Becky. Kit and Molly need two parents. Karnage didn't even know he won and got revenge by Baloo losing his freedom and he still is the man of freedom though he probably going to next in line.

Thank you very much for the comments. Out of all the fics that I've written, this is my favorite, too.

Yeah, I know Karnage was more evil than he was in most episodes, but, like you said, he had to be a little more evil for the fic to work.

I'm glad you enjoyed it.

This has to be the BEST Talespin fanfic I have ever read
You are very talented. It has a bit of everything (adventure, romance, ...) while staying true to the TS characters and universe. I definitely recommend every TS fans to read that one

The only thing that annoyed me was the fact Karnage seemed a lot more evil than in the series - then again it was probably necessary (and he was evil in Plunder & Lightning, even though he was lighter and almost comical in some episodes...) Anyway...

It's probably the first fanfic I'll have to read again, because I rushed to know the end (and I wasn't disappointed )