faced thing had a grin a rather creepy suspiciose grin. I tried running faster but something cuaght around my neck and I was pulled back and on the ground. The grumbling monster stopped. The flat faced thing jumped out of it and started walking towards me, along with many others. I kicked and got up right away. I wanted to run but this tight thing around my neck would not let me. They started saying something but it was in a weird languge. It seemed calming but I did not want to trust them. I pulled back on the lead and nipped at whoever came close to me. My ears were pinned back and my eyes wide with fear and anger. One of the flat faced got a long stick that was black and brown. It smelt of all different toxins and poisons. The flat faced pointed it in my direction and pulled a small thing. Something shot out of the stick. The next thing I know there was a small white, black, and red thing on my rump. I shrieked from being scared. Then started running they soon got in the fat animal again and started chasing me. I yawned but kept running. Something in me was telling me to stop. My muscles got tired quickly, quicker than usual. My eyes were slowly falling but I shook my head and kept running. I could feel myself slowing down. I stopped. Looking back I saw the fat animal with the flat faced inside. I wanted to run but could not I was to drowsy to. I was soon folding my legs under myself and laying my head down on  the grass. With one last yawn I fell into a deep sleep.

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Awoken by the sound of what seemed to be a very loud ear splitting croak from a bullftog, I stood to my trembling hooves quickly. I looked around, where was I? This was not home. There were very white gates and green grass with water splashing out of small black round things. There was so many horeses in these green meadows and there was a large red square thing. It was red and white with a large opening that the horses would go in and out of. I was all alone in my own small green meadow. Startled by the sound of squaling from one of the small, female flat faced, I jerked my head to see it. It was tugging at the large male flat faced. If I were to pull on my mothers mane I would be simply disencuaraged by a sharp nip. But this flat faced male just grinned and followed the small wiggley her flat faced. I huffed out my nose and turned the opissite direction of them. Showing disrespect. That would show them, no one messes with me. But then a large cry called out I could not help but turn my head to see the small female flat faced have water dripping from her big oval eyes. I let out a cry for help and started bolting in the oppisite direction. I hit the white fencing and splattered to the ground. I shook my head and imedeantly got up. The small one just cried louder. I turned my eats, hopeful that it would not be as loud.

"Go over there" A deep older voice said quietly. I turned to face it, there was a large brown mustang stallion.

"Why?" I asked shyly

"That will make 'er stop cryin" He huffed

I looked at him then the small one. "No way" I said. "That thing is scary"

"Suit yourself" he said and started walking over to the small one. The female stopped crying and started petting the wise horse.

I rolled my big eyes and started to look around once more. Quickly trotting, I started thinking of a way to get out of here. I was a bit taller now. So maybe I could jump the fence! No, it was pretty high.  Maybe, kick it down? Hmm... that will work! I will have to wait till those flat faced go away.

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After spending most of the day resting to charge up energy for kicking, I was up and ready and hyper! I trotted back and forth waiting till the last male flat faced left. He threw in some of the straight green stuff and left in his roaring fat animal. I smiled and nickered happily. When the fat animal and flat faced left I charged at the fence cousing a loud BLONK!! I slammed into the ground. I shook my head and got up. I looked at the white fence. It was only cracked a little bit. I had to charge at it agian. Backing up, I readied myself for the fall this time. I charged and BLONK! I hit the ground once again. This time I rose to my feet quicker. I saw the light go on and someone rustled inside the large white square nest to the red one. I back again, now the flat faced was on the porch they started running towards me. I gulped and started galloping to the fence. I new I could not break threw it... I had to jump it! Here it went. I got my legs in a pouncing postion then jumped, I cleared the fence! It was an amazing feeling. I landed on my feet and took off. I was out of sight by the time the flat faced got there. I was very proud of myself then I heard a voice call "Those things you call flat faced are called Humans!" it yelled "good luck to you filly!" He called as I disapeared into a small forest that led to a meadow. I saw it on the way hear. I think?

I smiled this was only the begining of my adventure thru the wild west.

(You will all have to wait for the rest! Haha! Sorry for spelling mistakes I am not a very good speller)



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December 22, 2012
Very nice story; I enjoyed every bit of it! Is it set in somewhat modern times? The "fat animals" sound a lot like cars to me.

If you would like me too, I can correct your grammar mistakes. Just pm me if you want me to.

June 30, 2012
Thank you! Sorry for the length xD

June 29, 2012
Usa Female
Born To Make History
I really like it! Can't wait for the next part.




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