Evita and a journey of a lifetime

Author : Shiny Vaporeon(KV)

Date sent : October 04, 2011

Rating : G (Everyone)

Category : Other

Description : this is the story of my new coming up character Evita.I think this is coming out pretty good so I am going to post it, would love to get your opinions! :D if you want your horse to be a friend of hers in one of the places she goes to pm me ^^ and keep a look out for the next chapter!

Length : Very short -

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Evita and a journey of a lifetime
By Shiny Vaporeon(KV)

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October 25, 2011
Usa
Good story. Cant wait to hear the rest. :howl: :duckiemouth: :allears: :closedgrin:

October 08, 2011
Usa Female
thanks! and yea I know xD I suck at puncuation xD that always gets me sadly XD glad someone has read it though and likes it!! I need to start on chapter 2 but when Im sick all I want to do is color XD

October 07, 2011
Usa Female
Tring to keep the darkness in.
Very good. You use some really nice words. Though, I think you need some more punchuation. ;) Please don't take that to heart, just a little friendly advice. But, I think you did really well, I really love the begining. It was really well writen. Great job, can't wait until chapter two.
K.S T.RP




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