This story starts when Mariko a son of Bamboozle is playing with his siblings. “Bet you can’t catch me!” Mariko said playfully as his sister FlameFly chased him. Aniya soon joined the game with Everly, Mariko never like his younger brother Everly because he was a wimp and tried to cause problems for Mariko. Then Aniya said “Tag your it Mariko” Mariko giggled and then started chasing FlameFly and then Everly said “Getting beaten by a girl are we Mariko?” “No I’m not” Mariko said and he jumped Everly and Everly moved out the way and Mariko slammed into the tree and all his siblings laughed and Everly said “What’s Wrong Mariko are we abit stumped?” His siblings kept laughing then Mariko retorted “Well Everly I’m not the one with a snake on my back and Everly looked round in horror to see a snake on his back. Everly bucked trying to get it off him and when he did he and his siblings backed off apart from Mariko, Mariko wanted to be like his father and he suddenly killed the snake by stamping on its head an Everly said “I could have done that if I wanted to!” “Oh really?” Mariko said “Everly your all talk and no true” “Well then Mariko lets see who’s stronger and better.” “Be my pleasure!” Mariko retorted and the colts ran at each other in the start to a great rivalry between them. The colts fort and it looked like Mariko was winning then Everly fell and Mariko reared he was about to ram is hoof onto Everlys  face and then Cianna, Astrid and Bamboozle came out of now where and Cianna yelled “MARIKO what are you doing?!?!” Now this is where Mariko got grounded and had lessons with his father ok lets skip that to when Mariko is  an adult. Now this is where the story truly begins. Mariko watched as his father Bamboozle fort Dentin. Dentin was winning as his father whinnied in pain. Then as Mariko watched Bamboozle fell to the floor showing sighs of dying. Mariko rushed to his fathers aid but nothing could help him now Dentin had taken a chunk out of Bamboozles neck and had also broken his rib cage. Dentin galloped away nickering in victory and then he looked at Bamboozles body and saw a identical version of Bamboozle Dentin realized Bamboozles son Mariko. Dentin knew Mariko would come after him. Mariko nuzzled his father hoping he was still alive and then tears gushed from his eyes and he began to sob. He knew he would have to tell everyone what happen. Mariko knew his father would always always be in his heart and then his fathers words of value rang in his ears “A stallion is classified by their strength they can not cry, or show any sign of weakness within view of the herd, or enemy, However when a loved one has gone they must not give up hope” The words rang in his ears. Mariko made an oat he would revenge his father and take his rightful place as the lead stallion. Mariko went to the herd Dentin was not their yet and Mariko knew he was letting Mariko break the news to everyone. The mares were upset they couldn’t believe Mariko until they saw Bamboozles body. Mariko left quickly. But when Mariko was away some changes happen to the mares…

Aradia got an eating problem and grew fat, Nitchoi became a babysitter for the adults (something she wouldn’t do) and Cianna wouldn’t accept anything. The new lead stallion Dentin needed a new lead mare he did not approach Aradia as she was too fat for him. He went over to Cianna and said “Would you like to be the new lead mare?” “No Bamboozle was my only love and you killed him and you expect me to be your lead mare?”  Then Dentin asked Nitchoi and she had a little flirt with him and Nitchoi became lead mare. Mariko needed to find his siblings. He set off on a journey and found them they had started a herd and Mariko said “Dads dead I need your help….."

Everly said "Your joking dad can't be dead!" "HES dead Everly" Everly snorted "Well why do you need are help?" "Because I need your help as Dentins to strong for me to handle alone" "Ok" Everly said "We will help won't we" he said to their other siblings. Mariko took them to the herd where they saw Dentin ruleling with Nitchoi... "Mum" said FlameFly "How how could she?" FlameFly wimperd Mariko and Everly rolled their eyes. Then Mariko said "Right guys I need you to get to the mares I will take Dentin" his siblings went. Mariko sighed it was time to take his place as lead stallion. He walked into the vally saying "Dentin I have come to take my place as lead stallion!" Dentin laughed "You? Really?" "Yes!" Mariko said and then Mariko said "I challenge you Dentin the winner gets the herd" "Bring on" Dentin said laughing cruely. The battle began Dentin soon had Mariko on the floor he was rearing saying "You going to die the same way your father did!" "Well lead stallion is rightfully mine" Mariko said he was in pain and then to everyones suprise someone said "The rightful place of lead stallion is me" Mariko would know that voice anywhere his dads! Dentin obviously didn't hear the voice and then he reared and the voice came again and this time the stallion walked into the vally and said "Get the hell away from my son!" Dentin whinnied in fear n"Bamboozle how?" "Oh that doesn't matter" the stallion said and he leapt at Dentin knocking the stallion over and then looked at Nitchoi realising she was lead mare "Nitchoi what the hell are you doing?" Bamboozle asked then he reared at Dentin and like Dentin had done to him he broke the other stallions rib cage and he did it again. Bamboozle reared in victory all the mares whinnied with joy!

well this is where are story ends but I hope it has been good



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March 28, 2012
Usa
oh can you aser that in my pivit messg plz :)

March 28, 2012
Usa
you should turn it into a story cuz that was really good and if you need help I can help you ok :)




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