trying to comfort her. He saw a dead horse a white a snow with no one to care about him, no one to love him... "I understand now Spirit! I can change!" the Albino cried. "It's too late Albino!" Strider yelled. "You time just ran out!!" "NOOOOOOOO!" screamed the Albino as he tumbled into the grave he dug himself.

 

Redemption

 The Albino opened his eyes. Nothing had changed, it was Christmas morning! He whinned for joy, waking the whole herd up. "Come everyone! We must go to the Cimarron!" From then on, the Albino was good to his promise and better. He apologized to Penny and Aspen and brought the whole herd with him to Christmas dinner. He took several of the orphan foals into his herd and helped Freedom recover from his sickness. Such a great change occured in his heart that a moral was passed down through all generations; its never to late to change!

The End



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September 29, 2011
Cute!

Guest
Guest
February 12, 2011
Thansk Blitz!:icon303:

February 01, 2011
Canada Female
Mercury Phoenix Trust
cute (:

Guest
Guest
January 07, 2011
Thanks! I'm glad you like it!:icon305:

January 06, 2011
Usa
The Albino&Royal herds
Good story! But, I have a plan for a fanfic of the Albino's life. I like the story though. Good job!

Guest
Guest
December 30, 2010
Thank You!:)

December 30, 2010
Usa
I like the details you put into it!

Guest
Guest
December 24, 2010
Thanks Guys!

December 24, 2010
Usa Female
Tring to keep the darkness in.
:'( How sweet, I love it so much! ^^ :D

December 24, 2010
Australia Female
Angel of Darkness.
ohhh i like this :P




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