and she knew her daughter would not take no for an answer. But she was scared that Morning Arrow would get hurt or captured. But she guessed it was the right thing to let her child be free to make her own choices, after all she was almost an adult now. “Go on then.” Rain smiled to her daughter. Morning Arrow nuzzled her mother and said goodbye then galloped to her father and said goodbye to him. Then she galloped off into the unknown. END OF PART ONE

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Jeronimo	September 01, 2010

	I Iz A Child Catcher XD

I know right! I am currently writing the second one

But there will be about 4 :D And I might do a series for Phillip.. cos I luvs him


Gemmawol f	August 20, 2010

Lol - "we're hunting deer... what are you?" "a deer"
... AWKWARD!
great story, can't wait for more


Wild-Dre amer5	August 17, 2010

Awww i love bunnys there so Cute!!!


Jeronimo	August 16, 2010

	I Iz A Child Catcher XD

I can imagine Phillip wolf whistling and saying, "All right Girls?" Hehehe I love him so so much. I'm gonna name my rabbit Phillip when I get him :D


Wild-Dre amer5	August 15, 2010

Hahaha Phillip does seem like a ladies manLOLOL!!!! great story LOLOLOL!! love it!!!!


Jeronimo	August 15, 2010

	I Iz A Child Catcher XD

Hehe, yeah got that idea from a friends little brother who makes up stories.


Guest	August 15, 2010

Great story!!! The 'fire- breathing' deer was funny!!!

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