i am a child that you talk to be as if i am a bug its the fact I am not like you" Weeping Doe shot back. The man got off his horse and walked ot her. Her grabed her hair and flung her to the ground. Weeping Doe flung her hair out of her face and cursed him in her own tounge. " why do you bother talking to these Savage people Colonel Chanson just take what they've got." A anotherĀ  man said. "theives!" Weeping Doe said standing up. "you shall get nothing from us" she added. Colonel Chanson reached up to slap her but Sunray got in his face, Her ears pressed flat agenst her skull and the whites of her eyes shown brightly. Chanson steped back some. "your cowards!, wait until our men are gone! and then take use for everyitng we've got!" Weepign doe yelled. Wikia grabed Weeping Doe's arm. "calm down dear give them anyhting they want and they'll leave" She whispered. Weeping Doe glared at Chanson even more. "no I will not let them pass" She barked. Colonel Chanson smirked and eyed Weeping Doe. "fine how about a trade?" he said smugly. Weeping Doe never stopted glaring "what kind of trade?" she asked. "you, we'll leave your tribe alone but i want you in return" Chanson said. Weeping Doe Looked back at her tribe and then at the man. "fine" she Said. "no child!" Wilika said grabing Weeping Doe and pulling her closer. "it'll be fine, when Little Creek comes back, tell him to find me Sunray will follow these men come back and lead him to me" Weeping Doe Whispered. Wilika nodded and let go, the poor old woman was close to tears. Chanson grabed Weeping Doe arm roughly. "come one" he hissed praticaly tossing her onto his horse. "lets go!" chanson ordered the other men and they were off.



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May 08, 2010
Usa Female
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thanks!!!

April 22, 2010
Usa Female
I think it's pretty good! I can't wait for more!

January 31, 2010
Usa Female
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aw thank you:P

January 29, 2010
Uk
so good!!! i was looking forward to this for a while, i think its worth the wait!! faves.:P

December 30, 2009
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tired to make it longer this time it will get longer and longer hopefully every time:P




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