Escape // Lineart Wip


Escape // Lineart Wip

A new drawing I did, I would love your feedback




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September 05, 2013
Uk Female
You're very welcome, Knight ^^ I know how much constructive criticism helps me when I'm trying to get my art right ^^

September 05, 2013
Australia
Aww thanks beth, and thankyou for the tips ill defiantly try do that ^^

September 04, 2013
Uk Female
It's beautiful, Knight! The fluid lines really add motion and energy to the character. Try to move the hooves a little further forward from the fetlocks, though, or they'll end up looking a bit 'blocky'. Take a look at Spirit's hooves. They're slightly forward and underneath his fetlocks.

http://i2.wp.com/screencaps.us [...] -disneyscreencaps.com-7868.jpg

The only other thing I'd mention is that the withers look a little bony. Perhaps make the neck slightly thicker towards the withers. Aside from those, however, it's a fantastic picture, absolutely beautiful ^^




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