

Name: Dolphina
Nicknames: Dolphy or Dolly
Age: 5 years
Gender: Female - Mare
Sire: Unknown
Dam: Unknown
Sisters: N/A
Brothers: N/A
Mate:
Crushes:
Crushes on her:
Foals: She wants one but she can't
Personality: The most time Dolphy is depressed and melanholic. She's not dedicated to anything. She's sweet and she trays not to hurt ones she love. She's very anti-social and she has many fears. She loves to go on one special cliff where she watches stars and crys with unknown reason. Fcat that she can't have any foal also effected on her.
History: Rainy night. Storm is about to start. People and animals are hiding. If you were there you would notice one black figure coming to you. Each step was followed by blue lightning. Creature ran faster and faster. It came really near and now it's obvious that mysterious creature is horse. It ran near you and disapeared in night. You could only hear sound of its steps. If you were there you have to know that you met Dolphina. Next morning found her lying in the grass near big oak. She stared around her with visable fear on her face. But when she was totally sure that she's safe she stand up and started to explore. Soon she found out that she's near to the Cheyenne village. She was little concerned. But when she went to the village she saw people singing and dancing, talking with happy expressions on their faces. She saw kids playing with coyote pups and few teen boys competing about riding wild horses. Their behaviour made Dolphina feels strange cause she never saw anything like it. She saw women washing clothes in the river. One of them noticed Dolly watching her and she called her with greatings. Dolly was surprised but in same time she felt really unusual. Then she saw baby girl sitting on her grandpa's lap while he was singing her a song about life of Chyennes. Dolphina knew that she found it. You probably ask what and I'll tell you. She found what many people are searching for..... She found home.
Other: Body Blank Render is made by Bluehawk's_ghost
| September 21, 2011 | ||
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Amy - Thanks! Sorry for disappointing you but I entered her into mate
contest so my answer is no Aniu - Thank you pal! That's not a problem at all! I cleaned
anywhere I saw mistake but for my sake if I make mistakes now please
correct me |
![]() | September 20, 2011 | |
Nice bio, I can tell that you took my advice with the spellcheck, but
I found out yesterday that the site does actually have a spellcheck
built in.... my bad! I still found a few grammatical errors that I would love to clean up for you if you would like! Other than that, nice lay out. It's very neat and clean! Dolly gets a fave from me! |
The few mistakes are only things that I don't blame you for missing since English isn't technically your first language. I'll do some trimming, and send you the finished copy, if you'd like. Also, I'd be happy to be your Beta reader(same thing as being the Editor in Chief) if you would like, before you send in new characters, etc,. I'd be glad to!