

MY VERY FIRST CHARACTER!!!! PLAESE BE NICE TO HIM! I WOULDN'T BE HAPPY IF YOU STEAL HIM!
Name: Phillipe
Age: 6 years
Parents:Unknown
Siblings: None
Mate:None yet
Foals:None
Likes: apples, wind in his mane, being wild, sunny weather
Dislikes: ropes and carrot
Personality: Phillipe is really hard and he knows that it's even harder to live with him. He change his mood very fast, from happily ever after to deadly angry.
History: No one knows much about his past and Phillipe tries to keep it like that. He doesn't want to talk about it and you can just guess how painful that memories are to him. He promised himself that he's turn his head to the future but forgetting past is harder then it seems. He always lived like loner but he deeply hopes taht he'll find good herd and find that magical place called home.
(Hope to add more soon)
Other: Lines by Aniutqa2; Shades, shades!! They're my friends! My teacher Calliope loves pixels but I just adore shadows and bluring
How he is related to Spirit: He traveled near Spirit's herd
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His design is excellent, I wouldn't change a thing, but... his bio. See, one way to attract more likes and comments is to have an easy to read bio, something that people don't have to mess with to understand it. I recommend(I personally do this to ALL my bios) running this through a spellcheck, or copying it onto a program that has one. This helps cut back on spelling errors, but then you let it sit and come back to it, read it slowly, and then correct and grammatical errors. People like unique, well written characters, and the "well-written" part refers to the writing about that character, hence the bio. My first piece of advice! And don't worry, I'm a perfectionist, so I have a tendency to re-re-read my bios five or six times to make sure that they're right. So I know how tempting it is to just let it set, I get it. If people like it, why change it, right? I was there once, but, trust me, there are simple things that you can do to leave a MUCH bigger impression. xD |
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Aniu - Thank you pal! I really tried to make classic into
amazing!Animal - Thank you very much! Not that bad for first character I
guess! I'll finish his history soon, depends on involving other
horses into his life |
Okay......