Hey, don't be upset. Thorin has a great design, you just need to make him slightly more original

Darkforest, please don't be rude to other members. Make sure you respect opinions.

It is stolen character. Doesn't matter if it's based form the book or the (crappy) movie, but it's Tolkien's character. You copied the name, story, personality and relations from soemone else's character. You just made Thorin into a horse and you claim it as your own character. Seriously, use some creativity and make your own stories and characters istead of turining Tolkien's work into horses. This kind of stuff is not tolerated here.