'Look Out!' ~Dakota's end
Sanura and Dakota were just playing, that was all. They were exploring together, laughing and talking. They having such a good time. Dakota suggested they go climbing and Sanura agreed. She challenged him to a race, a simple race. But she sped ahead, using all her strength to get up that rocky wall. Dakota was laughing and having a good time. Some rocks from above tumbled down the steep cliff, hitting others on the way. Dakota looked up and gasped, seeing boulders coming down the mountain straight for him. Sanura noticed what had happened. 'Look out!' She screamed, her voice high pitched with fear. Her eye's widened as she wached the boulders collide with Dakota. She screeched and cried, not actually making words but just sounds of panic. Sanura raced down to help her best friend but was too late.
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Yes, Dakota dies. I'm sorry. I loved him too but that's the way life goes. His death is quickly spread throughout the lands. Eventually, it makes it's way to Kimba, the king. Rumors spread that Dakota's death was really a murder and Sanura keeps quiet about it. Kimba eventually puts blame on another lion, who had a history of trouble. There Dakota's cruel death brings split between the kingdom and life will never be the same.
Base (c) Me
What do you think of the story? It's not done, don't worry. Dakota's death ends up helping the kingdom for the better, I promise!
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Yes, Dakota dies. I'm sorry. I loved him too but that's the way life goes. His death is quickly spread throughout the lands. Eventually, it makes it's way to Kimba, the king. Rumors spread that Dakota's death was really a murder and Sanura keeps quiet about it. Kimba eventually puts blame on another lion, who had a history of trouble. There Dakota's cruel death brings split between the kingdom and life will never be the same.
Base (c) Me
What do you think of the story? It's not done, don't worry. Dakota's death ends up helping the kingdom for the better, I promise!
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Thanks ^^ I didn't want all my character's stories to have that
'picture perfect' kind of ending. I'm glad you got what I was trying
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This is amazing!! I love the story behind it, yes it is sad! But it's also very realistic -- well as realistic as TLK can be. It was an accident, plain and simple - and I can see how it can blow out of proportion like this. I just love everything about this!  |
This is actually seriously very sad
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