happened? they asked.Nothing said Uru she looked back at Taka.What has gotten into you? she asked.Nothing! muttered Taka walking away.

{5}

Three days later,Taka seemed more then pouty.Taka! called Sarafina.What! growled Taka.You father wants you said Sarafina.Taka pricked his ears.My father wants me? he asked.Yes said Sarafina.Taka leaped up.He skipped to where his father was at the watering hole.Taka said Ahadi.Y..yes? asked Taka hoping he would get to be king.Come for a walk ordered Ahadi.Taka followed his father threw the grass.The stars were already glowing.My father's up there you know said Ahadi.Mohatu? asked Taka.No son...your mothers father was king before me..my father,Negrone he was Mohatus bestest friend..untill...he died explained Ahadi.There was a silence.Now was his chance.Father? asked Taka looking up.Yes son? answered Ahadi.W...why does Mufasa get tobe king?Ahadi stared at the stars.I don't know he answered in a sigh.Taka twitched his tail.I know why! yowled Taka.You like him better!You think he is stronger & bigger!You think I wouldn't be good enough!You like him more!Enough!Ahadi stood up.He reached a paw up & swiped at Takas face.Taka yowled.Placing a paw on his eyes he felt blood.Taka widend his eyes.Taka raced away back to Priderock.Mom! he cried.He stopped as Sarafina,Sarabi,Zira & Mufasa got in front of him.What happend! gasped Sarafina.Sarabi gasped aswell.Mufasa widend his eyes & looked at Ahadi who was coming up to them.Ahadi tryed to grab Taka but Taka ran to the cave.Uru jumped up.My son! she gasped.Uru wrapped her paw around him & looked at his scratch.Ahadi came in.Why did you do this to my son! she demmanded.Ahadi looked as if he was about to cry.I...I can't remember stammered Ahadi.Taka pressed into his mothers fur & cryed.Uru stood up & glared at Ahadi.Why did I marry you? she snarled.Taka stood up & walked away to his bed.I am going to bed he muttered.

 

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May 05, 2009
Its good, but you should put quotation marks where they talk.




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