Kiara, in spite the fact he barely remembers about her.
d be a better queen. However (I hope Tetesi forgives me if she is hearing what I say), I think Kiara would be a better mother to Dhalimu. Maybe because of her more gentle and simple-hearted nature… oh… what it cares now?
Somehow, the whole pride and Kauli are helping me to rule the Golden Sands, eventhough everyday I doubt if I am really a good king. So, if I may ask… mother… dad…. Scar… help me. And, if I may ask that… help me both of you, Tetesi and Kiara.
cept maybe when I tried to kill Simba. But it was necessary. I don’t know why, but I bet that Kauli got very pleased. “Go away.”
“Let’s go home.” I said finally. “Many bad things happened, but we can’t undo them. We could only make sure that none of those mistakes would be repeated in future.”
So we entered cave – smaller and harmed pride. But somehow stronger. We were whole again.
I am going very well with Dhalimu. I love him as I should love my son, and he loves me as he should love his father. Or maybe even more, because I am, somehow, father and mother to him at the same time. I refused to take any other lioness as my mate. I already have an heir, so I don’t think I need a mate anymore. Even if I needed, I wouldn’t be able to have one, after what happened to Tetesi and Kiara. Dhalimu is the best son in the world, but I notice that he seems a little bit jealous of the other cubs. I asked him several time why, but he always says it is because he doesn’t have a mother. He doesn’t hate me, he doesn’t place any fault on me, but he seems to place it all on Chungu and Angaa… probably when he becomes an adult he will hate rouges… I am trying to teach him that it was just the Circle of Life, it wasn’t meant to happen, but I have some doubts that he fully understands my explanations. He seemed to have a big bond with Kiara, in spite the fact he barely remembers about her.
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aerodynamic*
Okay, your premise was original - everyone dies.
The way you wrote it down was also pretty good, although a bit
short.
I didn't really got Kovu's reasoning, though. He was
pretty decisive in his actions right after the tragedy, but then seems
to lose focus.
That you shortly hinted at how Dhalimu would
develop in the future was a good move to end with, maybe even a
(minimal) improvement over the original version.