The Black Branch (ToS ending no. 4)
Author : ograndebatata
Date sent : April 14, 2008
Rating : PG-13 (Parents strongly cautioned)
Category : Slightly Controversial
Description : This is a fanfic I wrote about Taka_PL's fanfic "Trails on Sand". It follows the main story during all the common chapters, but this is a different possible ending, added to Taka_PL's three different endings. Read the rest to know. I hope you enjoy.
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Date sent : April 14, 2008
Rating : PG-13 (Parents strongly cautioned)
Category : Slightly Controversial
Description : This is a fanfic I wrote about Taka_PL's fanfic "Trails on Sand". It follows the main story during all the common chapters, but this is a different possible ending, added to Taka_PL's three different endings. Read the rest to know. I hope you enjoy.
Length : Short -
Characters :
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aerodynamic*
Okay, your premise was original - everyone dies.
The way you wrote it down was also pretty good, although a bit
short.
I didn't really got Kovu's reasoning, though. He was
pretty decisive in his actions right after the tragedy, but then seems
to lose focus.
That you shortly hinted at how Dhalimu would
develop in the future was a good move to end with, maybe even a
(minimal) improvement over the original version.