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| June 30, 2007 | ||
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I love it!! You wrote the characters well. I mean, you followed the books well. I'm a fan of the books, too. |
| June 25, 2007 | ||
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i think it is a very good story, but I don't think Rainwhiscker is the type of cat that would put donw a kittypet, after all he was always loyal to Firestar in the books. i think you should have used a char. that has a long history wiht Tigerstar, or anohter cat wiht some hate towards Firestar to pick on a kittypet. But overall i think you did a good job, I hope you finish the story sometime. |