little Simba about the elephant graveyard, as he knew the young prince couldn't resist going somewhere he was not supposed to. Then, he'd come here, maybe even with a friend, and the hyenas could eat him up, just like that.

"So, how's that sound?" Scar said when he finished his explanation.

The hyenas were excited to start. "When we gonna do it?"

"Today, if we must." Scar said. "Well, I'm going to go into the Pridelands and give little idiot Simba a talk about this place."

Scar got up, and slinked off. "Be sure, be sure to eat those little mangy furballs." He told the hyenas. Then, he disapered as always.

"Oh, you don't have to worry Scar. No worries." Shenzi said, licking her chops.

All three hyenas snickered and laughed.

End of Part 1.

To be continued...

 

 

 

 

 

  

way somehow!" She yelled.

"Not true!" Banzai argued back. "It's your fault! They probably smelled you from half a mile away!"

Shenzi gave a "oh no you didn't" look. "You! Why I oughta-your the one with bone breath!"

"What'd I tell you earlier! Bones. Don't....STINK!"

"Well, your bones do!" Shenzi said. And before they knew it, they were on top of each other, biting and nipping at each other ears, clawing faces, and fighting.

"It's your fault! No it's your fault!" Choruses could be heard throughout the whole graveyard. A curious Scar came to investigate. He entered the skull, and saw the three hyenas. "Well, what a wonderful day it's been for me." He thought.

Scar yelled to the hyenas. His voice was barely heard over the racket. "Cut it out, you fools!"

The three hyenas froze. They all stared at Scar for about three seconds, then snapped to attention. "Eer, sorry sir!" Said a rather embarrassed Banzai. All hyenas, who were looking rather foolish, blushed.

"What have you done this time?" Asked an annoyed Scar.

"Eer, nothing!" Shenzi said. "We were uh, bored, so we were having a wrestling-"

"Yes, whatever. I know where you three numbskulls have been."

"Uh, ya do?" Asked a nervous Shenzi.

"Yes. You snuck in there AGAIN. Didn't you?"

"Uh....yeah...but-"

"Now listen to me." Said Scar. "I won't get angry with you today because I understand your probably hungry."

"Um...ok?" Shenzi said, confused. She didn't understand why Scar wasn't giving his lecture.

"In fact," Scar continued. "I have a little job for you. You should get some good eats for a reward!"

"Re-Really?!" Banzai asked. "You mean...we'll get some zebra or something?"

Scar smiled evily. "Much better than that my friends. Much better."



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February 22, 2011
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The Oasis Pack
really good, Scar was really well done, can just imagining him saying those things! reading part 2 in a sec

January 18, 2008
Usa Female
Hey! I REALLY liked this fic. and I hope you make the 2nd
part soon. And (I'm not afraid to admit this either), I'm
kind of a BIG Shenzi/Banzai fan. And I was happy to see that
you portrayed the trio as friends. Could this be hope for
them?
Please make the sequel very soon!!

February 23, 2007
Usa Male
Nice writing style. Cool idea for a back story, too. Keep
it up.

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February 02, 2007
when's part 2 coming?

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December 29, 2006
I loved it *fav* I can't wait for Part 2.

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December 19, 2006
That was soo cool!




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