gesture and bolt of lighting struck the Cliffside ahead of them, sending a boulder the size of an elephant crashing down blacking their escape. Realizing she was aware of them they turned to face her obviously frightened. All remnants of their arrogance gone. Horrible things crossed her mind reflecting in her green eyes. She began to advance on them causing them to retreat until they where backed up against the wall of upper cliffs.
“ Look Nala isn’t it? You don’t need to kill us. We could be useful to you. Your going to need some servants.”
Void stammered.
“ Kill you? Of course I’m not going to kill you. I’m not evil.”
She laughed sadistically.
“ I intend to bury you alive and well. Death, now that’s your problem.”
The tigers looked baffled for a moment as they tried to figure out the meaningommand Null brought Simba from the cave where had been held. He was awake but barly able to walk his right front leg almost crippled. The tiger stalking impatiently behind him. Despite his injuries he had an aura of dignity about him as he walked out to the middle of the ledge to face Rohad.
“ For countless years boy my line had fought aganst yours. Now at last we shall out live you.”
Rohad said smugly glareing down at him.
“ Shut up and be done with it. Throw me back unto the great circles that in some other life I can take my revenge upon you.”
Simba responded calmly. Rohad jumped from the rock landing near him, snarling his face alit with rage.
d the tigers where gone. Nala was no where to be seen. The lionesses looked up in dismay at the huge cut carved into the once beautiful cliffs of their home. Simba gazed out over plains the sun reflecting off the golden grass. He wanted to look for her, more then anything in the world but in his heart he knew he wouldn’t find her. He had seen the message in her eyes. She was gone. His gaze turned to the massive wound cut into his home by the great storm.“ It’s a good thing.”
He said
“ After Scar we tried to hide from our past. We pretended we had put our injuries behind us. We shouldn’t have. I shouldn’t have. To many died, to many where hurt, we shouldn’t have tried to forget that. It wasn’t fair to them and it wasn’t fair to those who where still hurt. As long as our wounds remain hidden they cant heal. But this wound we cant forget its carved into our very home, and where going to have to deal with it.”
That night was peaceful. The stars shown as bright has he had ever seen them. Across the plains a warm breeze blew. Simba sat upon the so called perch of kings, lookiis black blood stained teeth. Then the last of the strength left him and he fell unceremoniously into the growing pool of his own blood.
Movement caught the corner of her eye. She turned to see the two tigers attempting to flee. She made a slight gesture and bolt of lighting struck the Cliffside ahead of them, sending a boulder the size of an elephant crashing down blacking their escape. Realizing she was aware of them they turned to face her obviously frightened. All remnants of their arrogance gone. Horrible things crossed her mind reflecting in her green eyes. She began to advance on them causing them to retreat until they where backed up against the wall of upper cliffs.
“ Look Nala isn’t it? You don’t need to kill us. We could be useful to you. Your going to need some servants.”
Void stammered.
“ Kill you? Of course I’m not going to kill you. I’m not evil.”
She laughed sadistically.
“ I intend to bury you alive and well. Death, now that’s your problem.”
The tigers looked baffled for a moment as they tried to figure out the meaningommand Null brought Simba from the cave where had been held. He was awake but barly able to walk his right front leg almost crippled. The tiger stalking impatiently behind him. Despite his injuries he had an aura of dignity about him as he walked out to the middle of the ledge to face Rohad.
“ For countless years boy my line had fought aganst yours. Now at last we shall out live you.”
Rohad said smugly glareing down at him.
“ Shut up and be done with it. Throw me back unto the great circles that in some other life I can take my revenge upon you.”
Simba responded calmly. Rohad jumped from the rock landing near him, snarling his face alit with rage.
ng out over the pridelands. Above him the birds where returning, borne back on fair winds. He couldn’t help but think of the past. The day that by a miracle Nala found him again so far from his home. That night they had together. One night before responsibility found them, and made them king and queen. How happy she had been, how they had smiled and laughed. How they had made love.“ I hope you find a way to heal your wounds my love. By a miracle we found each other once, I pray no wound is eternal, and that we find each other again when are both well.”
Lament of the Sun and Storm.
O, tell me the legend of the Sun and Storm
Of the time long ago when their war began
Of how the sky was divided light from dark
A fight for the battle of every beings heart
O, tell me the leagend of the Sun and Storm
Of how they loved before their war began
That I might yet have a happy end.
Simba’s Prayer
THE END
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| August 03, 2006 | ||
Now the FEW cons to the fic. I was dissapointed that Nala couldn't go
back to Simba at the end and they'd reunite and all that. Bummer that
Serabi died, and bummer that Raffiki died. But the WAY you wrote it
all. . .man. it's an inspiration to me to write better. I'm
currently writing a fic and I would LOVE to have your input when I'm
done. Great job again. ![]() |
| August 03, 2006 | ||
Okay, DUDE, you are THE BEST fic writer on the Lion King site and the
Balto one COMBINED! The way you say the words and the words you use
and the way you describe stuff mixes together and makes it flow SO
WELL!! You're the kind of person that people love and hate. They
hate you 'cuz you're so good, but they love your stuff. .
AWESOME, bang-UP job. I'm VERY impressed. |
![]() | June 08, 2006 | |
Loves the fan fics, Read both of them....musta took you a long time to
do, but well worth the effort! Only down side was the ocassionaly spelling or gramatical errors, but that aside the fics were awesomr, I especially loved Adriade in the Tiger Lion wars fic Cheersys ![]() Raika ![]() |
![]() | May 13, 2006 | |
wow, what an awesome story! i loved how u didnt try to ''dum it down''
by making it 4 children, the swearing was great . as 4 every1
complaining bout the violence and (censored) ( a little ova the top), they
should just relise that this isnt the original, its an extra story
that is awesome. so well done keep up the good work! |
![]() | May 06, 2006 | |
Creative story, but... dude.. it was still extremely disgusting. It
made the lions too human. And for the characters to be swearing? . . .
That's just sick dude. Don't be discouraged about writing! You have some decent talent. Just.. don't deface the purity of animals. Please. |'ll stick to the origional. |