spun her hateful glare locking on him.

“ GO HIDE KING OF THE SUN!”

She snarled her voice dark and cold. Simba stopped stunned. Nala saw the hurt in his eyes and for a moment her anger softened.

“ Simba please, you need to go now!”

She said her voice loving but distant. Behind her the white lion roared and the look of rage returned to her as she turned again to face him. Simba looked at her one more time and en that will hear your prayers. I’ve spoken to the darkness and its not happy with you. It thinks you have gotten arrogant and it would like to remind you that you are its servant not its master. It also said that it only needs one servant. Both of us are not necessary. You are about to be replaced Rohad king of storm. I will be a true queen tonight!”

He smiled as he stood to face her.

“ So you sold your soul to defeat me? I’m proud of you. You may yet have glory in your future, but Nala it will be my future. I have worked very hard for a very long time and I do not intent to fall. It will take more then a simple bargain at the price of a single soul to bring about my end.”

She smiled back.

“Your wrong I have more then simply what the darkness gave me. I have rage. I have hate, and you hurt my love.”

They both roared and lunged at the same time, slamming into each other exchanging blows of incredible power that shook the ground beneath them. Lighting struck pride rock high up on its cliffs sending gigantic boulders plummeting down upon the lower ledges. The storm above convulsed as if mirroring their fight. The pride ran for the caves the two tigers bommand Null brought Simba from the cave where had been held. He was awake but barly able to walk his right front leg almost crippled. The tiger stalking impatiently behind him. Despite his injuries he had an aura of dignity about him as he walked out to the middle of the ledge to face Rohad.

“ For countless years boy my line had fought aganst yours. Now at last we shall out live you.”

Rohad said smugly glareing down at him.

“ Shut up and be done with it. Throw me back unto the great circles that in some other life I can take my revenge upon you.”

Simba responded calmly. Rohad jumped from the rock landing near him, snarling his face alit with rage.

then ran for the shelter of the caves where the rest of the pride had fled. Now the only two on the ledge, Rohad and Nala began to circle each other. The storm raging all around them as if the world where threatening to come to an end. Rohad waved his paw yelling at the sky and a bolt of lighting shot down at her. With a strange laugh she brushed it aside the excess energy crackling around her on the wet ground.

“ It was my blood that you used to finish your spell fool. This is my storm!” She screamed another bolt shooting down from the sky towards him. He dove out of it way and with a quick turn caught her by surprise. Nala failed to move fast enough and the white lion slammed his shoulder into her side bowling her over. His claws tearing at her side and back. She managed to roll somewhat and smacked him just under the chin. The blow just infuriating him further. He reared up for just a moment, coming down with a blow to her chest sending her sprawling across the ground. She landed against a rock and lay trying to make her self stand. Excruciatingly painful lacerations all down one side of her body. Rohad still snarling began to advance on her determined to kill her before she got up. Overcome with a murderous berserk frenzy he paid no attention to his own injuries nor the blood begging to stain his white fur. As he reached her the strength in his legs gave oen that will hear your prayers. I’ve spoken to the darkness and its not happy with you. It thinks you have gotten arrogant and it would like to remind you that you are its servant not its master. It also said that it only needs one servant. Both of us are not necessary. You are about to be replaced Rohad king of storm. I will be a true queen tonight!”

He smiled as he stood to face her.

“ So you sold your soul to defeat me? I’m proud of you. You may yet have glory in your future, but Nala it will be my future. I have worked very hard for a very long time and I do not intent to fall. It will take more then a simple bargain at the price of a single soul to bring about my end.”

She smiled back.

“Your wrong I have more then simply what the darkness gave me. I have rage. I have hate, and you hurt my love.”

They both roared and lunged at the same time, slamming into each other exchanging blows of incredible power that shook the ground beneath them. Lighting struck pride rock high up on its cliffs sending gigantic boulders plummeting down upon the lower ledges. The storm above convulsed as if mirroring their fight. The pride ran for the caves the two tigers bommand Null brought Simba from the cave where had been held. He was awake but barly able to walk his right front leg almost crippled. The tiger stalking impatiently behind him. Despite his injuries he had an aura of dignity about him as he walked out to the middle of the ledge to face Rohad.

“ For countless years boy my line had fought aganst yours. Now at last we shall out live you.”

Rohad said smugly glareing down at him.

“ Shut up and be done with it. Throw me back unto the great circles that in some other life I can take my revenge upon you.”

Simba responded calmly. Rohad jumped from the rock landing near him, snarling his face alit with rage.

ut and he fell. The warmth on his chest suddenly making him realize the blood pouring from a cut in his neck. A long slash across his throat from Nala’s last seemingly weak strike. He tried to stand again and failed. A confused look on his face. As Nala slowly got to her feet. He glared at her trying to hold his wound desperate to stop his life from pouring from his body.

“ I spoke to the devil Rohad”

Nala said standing over him.

“ If its any consolation, this will be your last death. You will never return again.”

“ Bitch! I’ve seen it…..The storm will end this world….IT WILL HAPPEN!.

He coughed

“ Then you will watch it from hell”

she replied a pleased smile on her face.

“ You will be joining me soon enough”

“ Who said I intend to fall?”

She hissed. He tried again to stand, grimacing barring his black blood stained teeth. Then the last of the strength left him and he fell unceremoniously into the growing pool of his own blood.

Movement caught the corner of her eye. She turned to see the two tigers attempting to flee. She made a slight gesture and bolt of lighting struck the Cliffside ahead of them, sending a boulder the size of an elephant crashing down blacking their escape. Realizing she was aware of them they turned to face her obviously frightened. All remnants of their arrogance gone. Horrible things crossed her mind reflecting in her green eyes. She began to advance on them causing them to retreat until they where backed up against the wall of upper cliffs.

“ Look Nala isn’t it? You don’t need to kill us. We could be useful to you. Your going to need some servants.”

Void stammered.

“ Kill you? Of course I’m not going to kill you. I’m not evil.”

She laughed sadistically.

“ I intend to bury you alive and well. Death, now that’s your problem.”

The tigers looked baffled for a moment as they tried to figure out the meaningommand Null brought Simba from the cave where had been held. He was awake but barly able to walk his right front leg almost crippled. The tiger stalking impatiently behind him. Despite his injuries he had an aura of dignity about him as he walked out to the middle of the ledge to face Rohad.

“ For countless years boy my line had fought aganst yours. Now at last we shall out live you.”

Rohad said smugly glareing down at him.

“ Shut up and be done with it. Throw me back unto the great circles that in some other life I can take my revenge upon you.”

Simba responded calmly. Rohad jumped from the rock landing near him, snarling his face alit with rage.

of what she had just said. With a freighting smile she waved her paw. Seven different bolts of lighting struck the very top of pride rock. Sounds of cracking could be heard echoing throughout the caves. Their was a pause and everything went silent even the thunder overhead. Then their was a roar like the great stone of pride rock was a giant beast as a quarter of its cliff side broke free and came crashing down. Obliterating the upper cliffs and slammed into the main ledge like a knife. Nala braced herself as the cloud of debris and dust washed over her and when it was gone their was a stone wall where the tigers had once been.

She looked out at the plains and at her command the black pillar rose back up into the sky. The dark clouds became erratic and lighting rended the sky. The storm recognizing its end. Nala’s gaze moved to caves where the pride was hiding. Where Simba was waiting for her. She felt her heart quake longing for the comfort of her home. Then she turned down the path towards the plains and vanished into the darkness of the dying storm.

The sun rose the next day. The once dominating storm fadeing back unto the west and into oblivion. The pride emerged from the caves, where they had spent the night huddled together hiding from the storms death throes, to examine the dammage. The White lion lay deais black blood stained teeth. Then the last of the strength left him and he fell unceremoniously into the growing pool of his own blood.

Movement caught the corner of her eye. She turned to see the two tigers attempting to flee. She made a slight gesture and bolt



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October 03, 2008
Usa Male
Yippee!

August 03, 2006
Now the FEW cons to the fic. I was dissapointed that Nala couldn't go back to Simba at the end and they'd reunite and all that. Bummer that Serabi died, and bummer that Raffiki died. But the WAY you wrote it all. . .man. it's an inspiration to me to write better. I'm currently writing a fic and I would LOVE to have your input when I'm done. Great job again. :cool:

August 03, 2006
Okay, DUDE, you are THE BEST fic writer on the Lion King site and the Balto one COMBINED! The way you say the words and the words you use and the way you describe stuff mixes together and makes it flow SO WELL!! You're the kind of person that people love and hate. They hate you 'cuz you're so good, but they love your stuff. lol. AWESOME, bang-UP job. I'm VERY impressed.

Raika
Raika
June 08, 2006
Loves the fan fics, Read both of them....musta took you a long time to do, but well worth the effort!

Only down side was the ocassionaly spelling or gramatical errors, but that aside the fics were awesomr, I especially loved Adriade in the Tiger Lion wars fic

Cheersys ;)
Raika;)

mole:3
Mole:3
May 13, 2006
wow, what an awesome story! i loved how u didnt try to ''dum it down'' by making it 4 children, the swearing was great lol. as 4 every1 complaining bout the violence and (censored) ( a little ova the top), they should just relise that this isnt the original, its an extra story that is awesome. so well done keep up the good work!

george the lion
George
the lion
May 08, 2006
great story loved it but if you type anymore make it more rude hehe ^_^:P

Kiwi
Kiwi
May 06, 2006
Creative story, but... dude.. it was still extremely disgusting. It made the lions too human. And for the characters to be swearing? . . . That's just sick dude.

Don't be discouraged about writing! You have some decent talent. Just.. don't deface the purity of animals. Please.

|'ll stick to the origional.




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