Yippee!

Now the FEW cons to the fic. I was dissapointed that Nala couldn't go back to Simba at the end and they'd reunite and all that. Bummer that Serabi died, and bummer that Raffiki died. But the WAY you wrote it all. . .man. it's an inspiration to me to write better. I'm currently writing a fic and I would LOVE to have your input when I'm done. Great job again.

Okay, DUDE, you are THE BEST fic writer on the Lion King site and the Balto one COMBINED! The way you say the words and the words you use and the way you describe stuff mixes together and makes it flow SO WELL!! You're the kind of person that people love and hate. They hate you 'cuz you're so good, but they love your stuff. . AWESOME, bang-UP job. I'm VERY impressed.

Loves the fan fics, Read both of them....musta took you a long time to do, but well worth the effort!

Only down side was the ocassionaly spelling or gramatical errors, but that aside the fics were awesomr, I especially loved Adriade in the Tiger Lion wars fic

Cheersys
Raika

wow, what an awesome story! i loved how u didnt try to ''dum it down'' by making it 4 children, the swearing was great . as 4 every1 complaining bout the violence and (censored) ( a little ova the top), they should just relise that this isnt the original, its an extra story that is awesome. so well done keep up the good work!

great story loved it but if you type anymore make it more rude hehe ^_^

Creative story, but... dude.. it was still extremely disgusting. It made the lions too human. And for the characters to be swearing? . . . That's just sick dude.

Don't be discouraged about writing! You have some decent talent. Just.. don't deface the purity of animals. Please.

|'ll stick to the origional.