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![]() | December 21, 2013 | |
This is confusing to read. It's hard to understand on who's talking
when all conversations are in the same paragraph. This needs lots of
editing...I don't mean to sound mean, but when people write stories
like this it bothers me extremely. I would like to read on, but as
confusing as it is, I just can't bear to do it. |
| October 03, 2013 | ||
Site Builder (Content), Site Builder (Gr... | ||
| Founder of The Silver Herd |
Wow! You put Len here! It's great, I like how close he is to his
sister! Thanks, Glammy! |