'Kill him.' Scar ordered to the hyenas.
he watched with glee as the dogs ran off, barking and snarling.
'Ah. I was waiting for them to go. Now I can talk to you.' he said, encircling Mufasa's dead body.
'Now brother, don't you see? I told you not to mess with me. Hey, i'm a poet!' Scar smirked evilly.
'This is what you get for all those years of pain you caused me! I should've been King! I should've got Sarabi. but obvioulsy golden boy gets it.' Scar sniffed.
'Well, I guess we're evens now. You take away my crush and my dreams, and I take away your son and your life.' Scar looked at his claws.
'Yet...you were my brother...' he said almost wistfully and regretfully.
Then he shook his mane.
'No, have no sympathy Scar!' and he buried his claws into Mufasa's side. He dragged them down, causing long scratch marks.
'Sleep my brother, sleep...'
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Tense times, tense times.
lol This failed but ah well. I like the story line I has >;3