The Scar's Heir ver 2
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This text tells us about REAL history of Scar and Prideland. It tells about facts neglected by films and allows us to see character of Scar in completely different perspective.
It also tells about Vitani and how she discovers her legacy.
Finally, it tells about Tanabi – Simba’s cub, shown in ending of Lion King, but not present in Simba’s Pride. What happened to him? Read to know.
Is Battle of Reunion at the end of Simba’s Pride is end of Lion’s Saga? No, it’s just a beginning!
Time to meet... the Scar’s Heir!
The Golden Queen 1/3
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This story is sequel (prequel? midquel?) to “The Scar’s Heir”. It tells us about real history of Zira and Outlanders during the times of exile. Also it shows us who was Kovu’s father and why Zira lost the Battle of Reunion.
(Due to technical difficulties, I’ve split TGQ into three parts)
Odd numbered chapters tells about times just before SP and even numbered chapters tell about times just after LK (apart of epilogue)
[Warning!
This fan-fic was written by non-english-speaking author. Due to my limited language (and poetical!) skills, it may contains lot of grammatical and syntax errors. Please, don’t bother with harsh form of the text, and try to focus on the plot.]
Pictures by Dorcia © 2006 and Sarafina © 2007
The Golden Queen 2/3
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This story is sequel (prequel? midquel?) to “The Scar’s Heir”. It tells us about real history of Zira and Outlanders during the times of exile. Also it shows us who was Kovu’s father and why Zira lost the Battle of Reunion.
(Due to technical difficulties, I’ve split TGQ into three parts)
Odd numbered chapters tells about times just before SP and even numbered chapters tell about times just after LK (apart of epilogue)
[Warning!
This fan-fic was written by non-english-speaking author. Due to my limited language (and poetical!) skills, it may contains lot of grammatical and syntax errors. Please, don’t bother with harsh form of the text, and try to focus on the plot.]
Pictures by Dorcia © 2006 and Sarafina © 2007
The Golden Queen 3/3
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This story is sequel (prequel? midquel?) to “The Scar’s Heir”. It tells us about real history of Zira and Outlanders during the times of exile. Also it shows us who was Kovu’s father and why Zira lost the Battle of Reunion.
(Due to technical difficulties, I’ve split TGQ into three parts)
Odd numbered chapters tells about times just before SP and even numbered chapters tell about times just after LK (apart of epilogue)
[Warning!
This fan-fic was written by non-english-speaking author. Due to my limited language (and poetical!) skills, it may contains lot of grammatical and syntax errors. Please, don’t bother with harsh form of the text, and try to focus on the plot.]
Pictures by Dorcia © 2006 and Sarafina © 2007
Flower on the rock
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The next Round (of The Circle of Life) 1/3
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After years of prosperity to Prideland and others Lion Lands came the Second Drought. Brave lionesses and lions have to fight against hostile elements in order to survive and to save traditions of pride. Taka the Second, son of Vitani and Tanabi, named that after his famous grandfather, reaches his maturity in those hard times...
This is the sequel of my previous fanfics [The Scar’s Heair] and [The Golden Queen], that follows the fate of children of Vitani and Tanabi, as well as son of Kiara and Kovu. It starts about six years after final of TSH (so also 6 years after TLK:SP). An introduction to this tale is in epilogue to TGQ.
Reading of TSH and TGQ is strongly recommended to understand the plot of this story.
I rated it as PG-10 due to few scenes of violence.
Excuse my harsh language – try to focus on the plot, believing that Polish original of this story is written much better.
Special thanks to BaltoLuver who encouraged me to translate TNR
The next Round (of The Circle of Life) 2/3
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Taka the Second became the Arbiter of Lions Lands. His duty is to keep the peace among the prides but it isn’t as easy as black-maned initially thought. Additionally in Golden Sands things are getting worse – madness of Dhalimu made lionesses life terrible.
This is the sequel of my previous fanfics [The Scar’s Heair] and [The Golden Queen], that follows the fate of children of Vitani and Tanabi, as well as son of Kiara and Kovu. It starts about six years after final of TSH (so also 6 years after TLK:SP). An introduction to this tale is in epilogue to TGQ.
Reading of TSH and TGQ is strongly recommended to understand the plot of this story.
I rated it as PG-10 due to few scenes of violence.
Excuse my harsh language – try to focus on the plot, believing that Polish original of this story is written much better.
Special thanks to BaltoLuver who encouraged me to translate TNR
The next Round (of The Circle of Life) 3/3
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Taka the Second – Arbiter of Lions Lands felt in love, almost challenged the mad ruler of Golden Sands and came across sophisticated plot of his brother-in-law. But those are not only highlights he meets on his way. Kings of the Past, the Ancient Ones have their own connected plans with black-maned. And that is what he should worry about...
This is the sequel of my previous fanfics [The Scar’s Heair] and [The Golden Queen], that follows the fate of children of Vitani and Tanabi, as well as son of Kiara and Kovu. It starts about six years after final of TSH (so also 6 years after TLK:SP). An introduction to this tale is in epilogue to TGQ.
Reading of TSH and TGQ is strongly recommended to understand the plot of this story.
I rated it as PG-10 due to few scenes of violence.
Excuse my harsh language – try to focus on the plot, believing that Polish original of this story is written much better.
Special thanks to BaltoLuver who encouraged me to translate TNR
Father’s Day (1/2)
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Father’s Day (2/2)
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Trails on Sand
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The Brown Branch (ToS ending no. 2)
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The Golden Branch (ToS ending no. 1)
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The Tawny Branch (ToS ending no. 3)
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Long Live the Queen
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LLtQ - Beyond Redemption (foreword)
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The Previous Round (of the Circle of Life) 1/3
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The Previous Round (of the Circle of Life) 2/3
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The Previous Round (of the Circle of Life) 3/3
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Comments
Thanks.
But I hope You read TSH and
TGQ before (anf if you didn't, idea of FotR had to seem real
weird )
for more detailed review, especially about plot’s
flaws (on PM for example). But I you have no time or fancy
on that just forget it.
For now I’m finishing
the Balto-fanfic’s translation and waiting for fanarts
to it. Soon it will be displayed.
The first part of my
Balto-fanfic (actually: Steele-fanfic) is now displayed on
my Balto-source fanfic-gallery.
Wolf
I do love a good Balto fic either way! Can't wait for it!
some entertainment with your work! It spurs me on further
writing.
Sequel... well – there is some kind of
sequel, but in polish for now. It tells about events six
years after SP/TSH, namely: about children of Vitani,
Tanabi, Kiara and Kovu (generation described in epilogue).
Epilogue is an only translated excerpt of that story.
I’ll think about translation when I have more time.
For now I’m translating Balto-fanfic. I if You are
a Steele-fan as well it might be quite interesting for You
Wolf
I always wondered why Simba had such a hatred for
Zira and the Outlanders and the reason for the exile.
The mystery of Kovu's father makes a lot of sense
in your vision. I love it! I also liked SP gapfillers.
The epilogue was also really good.
You're not planning on making a direct sequel to SP/TSH
are you? I don't know why I'm asking. Guess the epilogue
blew me away, but in a good way.
Again
excellent set of stories! Can't wait for more.
Sorry to leave such a long comment.
't Was great!
Personnaly, I feel it even surpasses 'The Scar's Heir ver
2', especially since 'The Golden Queen' had more suspense to
it. And mannaging to close up all plotholes between 'TKL
[1]' and 'TLK [2]', bravo!
But in spite of all that I
couldn't help but consider some characters a bit redundant.
And the teaser/epilogue felt a bit rushed. But that didn't really interfere all that much, so it's less of an issue.
Keep at
it,
Cogitor
All right – sequel of TSH is already
on the site. This is my vision of Outlanders community, I
hope You like it.
Thank for support – your words
made to think about another translation – my
Balto-fanfic. Because it’s long (but no as long as
TSH/TGQ) it will take some time, but I’m going to
publish it too.
Cogitor:
Ow, yes,
it’s rather odd in fanfiction. In polish version those
scenes were quite applauded, so I’ve decided not to
cut them from translation.
But the most important
thing is that You like the other, narrator’s part.
not-understandable in any way, or that it lacked in qualaty;
far from it! I just meant they make the fic kinda look like
more a script (could prove convienient if anyone ever
decides to make a movie). Certainly sets it appart, that's
for sure.
Wolf
Don't worry about the choreography parts, I still
understand what you're trying to say. It is amusing, but in
a good way.
Like you, I'm a Scar fan, but I
like Vitani the best out of the other outlanders, except
Scar that is.
Can't wait to read your next fic.
from the choreography parts, they're not my cup of tea. But
whatever happened to the hyenas? They just dissepeared
halfway after the storytelling (then again, they were more
of a vessel to explain Taka's past anyway). But any loose
end opens up a pathway for a sequel (hint).
Awaiting further publications,
Cogitor
Well, that was part of my vision of
describing whole story from Scar's/Outlanders point of view.
I'm a devouted fan of Zira and Scar and if I haven't meke
You like my heroes, I'm still hope, that some of You looked
on Lions Saga from different perspective.
All
right, I've sent next of my stories. I wonder, how You like
that.
Ps.
If anyone of You make some
fanart to my stories, I'll be honoured
Wolf
stories.
What you did making Vitani the heir of the Pridelands instead of Kiara was pure genius and having the son of Simba and Nala (who should have been in TLK 2 in the first place) was an even greater idea.
I've been a TLK fanatic since I was 7 and I'm 19 now and still love it!
Thanks!
Yes, there is one more
story, already written in english (it needs only few
changes, I’ll probably publish it in few days) and one
more only in polish version. But if there is serious
interest in my stories, I’ll think about translation.
To TLK
fanfic-standards this is epic, and as such I can only
express awe. Well done.
Pity you didn't write it in
your native language though, I feel your pain, writing in
English ain't easy
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