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Recently I have been writing this fanfic called A New Generation which is about Vitani and Kiara's cubs. Now I find myself with a writer's block unable to think of a good plot. Now it is up to you to finish the story.


 

The story goes as follows :
 
 
A New Generation
 
Chapter 1
 
Kopa was loitering in the grass when he heard hasty footsteps. He back to see his sister Kiara running to him unable to control her excitement. "It's a BOY!" She yelled. Kopa jumped up. "A Boy?" he asked. Kiara nodded. He ran into Pride Rock. The new king was born.
 
They named the boy Jasiri. Kopa expected him to grow up and be a brave king but little did he know that nothing was going to go as he planned. Jasiri grew up to be a lively cub who loved to hang out with Timon and Pumbaa. Though he was small, he was adventurous and brave. Things were finally going right for Kopa. Within days of Jasiri's birth,  Kiara and Kovu had a cub named Kiburi.
 
Kiburi and Jasiri were inseperable as cubs. They both spent a lot of time with their grandfather Simba and loved to listen to his stories. Simba, like Mufasa, had many adventures and thus had many stories to tell but the story he told most was the story of Scar and Mufasa.
 
One day, Kopa took Jasiri to the top of Pride Rock. Kiburi insisted on coming to see what the "magnificent surprise" was. Kopa allowed him to tag along. At the summit, Kopa showed the two cubs the Pridelands and told Jasiri that one day he would own all that. "But what if I don't want to own that?" Jasiri asked. "That's like saying you don't wanna be king." Kopa replied. "That's exactly what I mean." Jasiri confirmed. Kopa was taken aback. "Saying you don't wanna be king is like saying you don't wanna be a lion." he said. "But what about Uncle Kovu?" Jasiri argued," He's a lion, isn't he?"
 
"Jasiri, this is about your future, not Uncle Kovu's." Kopa said."I know, Dad. This is my future. Isn't it right that I get to decide what I wanna be?" Jasiri asked. Kopa was fuming. "Jasiri.............................." he began, but calmed down and continued," You'll understand in time, son." saying so, he walked away.
 
Immediately, after Kopa walked away, Kiburi caught Jasiri off guard and pinned him down. "What do you mean you don't want to be king?"he asked, slightly fuming, "who's gonna be king if you're not?" Jasiri bluntly replied, "You." Kiburi got off him and yelled," You mean to say you'd give up the throne for me? Oh, I love you bro. I promise I'll take care of the kingdom. I'll ............." Jasiri replied," Good for you. But I just don't want to be king." Kiburi stood open-mouthed. He started," Then bro, if not me, for whom? For what.......?" "For nobody and for nothing. I just don't wanna be king." Jasiri calmly replied." You see, this is your adventure and I don't want it. My adventure is out there." He pointed to the horizon. " Okay, then, I'll just stick with being king." Kiburi said. Jasiri sensed that something was coming up. And his suspicion was right. Kiburi burst out," Please don't leave me bro. I need you...I need you. I can't take care of the king's responsibilities on my own. I need your help." "Relax, Kiburi. I won't be going out on my own until I grow up." Jasiri calmed down his brother. " That's a relief." Kiburi heaved a sigh of relief.
 
Kiburi ran up to his grandmother, Nala, and aunt, Vitani, who were snoozing on a rock. "Hey Grandma, guess what?" he said. Nala put her head up and looked at her grandson. "I'll guess its something really good for you to come and tell me?" she said. "I'm going to be the next king. Jasiri said that since he doesn't wanna be, I am." Kiburi said. Nala sat up." Jasiri's not gonna be the king?" she asked. "Yep." Kiburi replied. "Atleast he knows the laws of the land. I suppose he knew that you were next in line after him." Nala sighed. "Kiburi, go tell this news to your parents." "Great. Where do I  find them?" he asked." Near those acacia trees over there. Go find them and tell them the good news." Nala said. After Kiburi bounded away, she sighed. "And the bad news." she whispered. She looked at Vitani, who gave her a look of horror. She couldn't believe it. Her son, Jasiri, didn't want to be the king. Vitani decided she would talk to him later.
 
That night, Kiburi and Jasiri settled down for another story from Simba. He told them the story of Scar and Mufasa. Kiburi listened intendly till Simba got to the part where Scar threw Mufasa off the cliff. Kiburi put up his ears. "Really?" he asked. "Yes, Kiburi. Scar pushed Mufasa off the cliff after whispering the words 'Long Live The King' in his ear. He made me believe that I had killed my father and made me run away. I didn't know the truth until Nala found me. She told me the state of the Pridelands and I returned to reclaim what was rightfully mine." Simba said. "Simba, it wasn't all that easy." Nala piped up." He didn't rush back as soon as I told him to go back. It took his father's ghost appearing in the sky to get some sense knocked into him. Don't you remember?" "Nala, take it easy. I'm trying to be a hero for these kids." Simba whispered. "Bed-time." Vitani said, sending the cubs to bed. Kiburi' head was buzzing with thoughts: Was Scar really that cruel even as a cub? Are brothers also evil? What if I have a brother? Would he throw me off a cliff too?
 
Chapter 2
 
Kiburi ran looking for his parents. He found them near the water-hole. They seemed really happy about something. He was going to them to tell them about the way he felt about brothers. "Ah, there you are, Kiburi." his father said. "We have good news for you." "Um...Dad, there's something I need to tell you and Mom." Kiburi said. "That can wait for later, I suppose." Kovu replied. "The news first. Your mother is pregnant with another cub." Kiburi jumped. "So it means that I'll be getting a brother or sister?" he asked, weakly. "That's right." Kiara replied. "Isn't it good news? You'll finally have a brother or sister to take care of." "Yeah, Mom, its great news." Kiburi's worst fears were confirmed. He deperately hoped hat it would be a girl who couldn't push him off a cliff.
 
"This is great news, Kiburi." Jasiri exclaimed. "We'll finally have a new playmate." The two cubs were with the other lionesses. Vitani was giving Jasiri a bath as the two cubs talked. Kiburi had just told him the news of his new sibling. "Oh, and you get to be a big brother. I wish I could too." "I'd gladly give the new cub to you if I could." Kiburi said, sulkily. "Hey, Bro, what's wrong? You don't look to happy." Jasiri noticed. "I'll tell you when we get out of earshot." Kiburi whispered. "Oh." Jasiri realised. "Um, Mom, can I go with Kiburi?" he asked. Vitani considered. "Sure." The two cubs ran onto the plains.
 
"So, what's the catch?" Jasiri asked. "You know the story of Scar and Mufasa?" Kiburi asked. "Sure." Jasiri replied. "Shhhh. Not so loud." Kiburi whispered. "Oh." Jasiri said in a whisper. Their conversation from then was a whisper. "So, what about Scar and Mufasa?" Jasiri asked. "He was Mufasa's brother, right?" Kiburi asked. "Yeah." "And he killed Mufasa, right?" "Right." "So, what if the cub turns out to be a boy?" "So, what if he's a boy?" "He might kill me too." "Kiburi, are you crazy?!!?" "I'm not." "Then why do you think brothers are evil?" "Well, Scar did kill Mufasa......" "So you expect your little brother to kill you? You are crazy." "Jasiri, listen to me...." "Why would I want to listen to a guy who is afraid of being a big brother?" "Jasiri, you don't understand. Brothers...." "Your dad and Nuka were brothers. Nuka didn't kill him, did he?" "But...." Jasiri shook his head and walked away. "What have I done?" Kiburi wondered.
 
Jasiri seemed really angry with Kiburi that day, so he took a walk along the water-hole. Kiburi was so rngrossed in thought that he didn't see where he was going and bumped into something. "Hey! Watch it!" said a female voice. Kiburi looked up to see that he had bumped into a brown lioness cub. She looked really mad at him. "Can't you see I'm here?" she yelled at him. "I'm sorry. i wasn't looking." he mumbled, avoiding her eyes as he still was upset about the arguement. "Then better start looking." she growled. "One question," Kiburi said. "Who are you? These are the Pridelands. Outlanders aren't allowed." "I'm a Pridelander alright." she said. "My name's Kuona. I'm technically a part of your pride." "Sorry. I thought you weren't part of the Pridelanders." Kiburi said. Kuona seemed to notice something wrong with him. "Hey, what's wrong?" She asked him. "And who are you?" "I'm Kiburi, next in line to be king." He said. "My cousin's super-mad at me right now." "Your cousin's the future king?" "Yeah." "So, why's he mad at you?" Kiburi told her the whole story.
 
"Wow. That's some conversation. But he's right, you shouldn't be afraid of being a big brother." She said. "You don't know what its like." he said, and began to walk on the rocks in the water. "Don't go there!" she yelled. "Those aren't rocks! They're.........." Suddenly, the rock he was standing on lifted itself up to show a long snout, a scaly back and a mouth with razor sharp teeth. ".....Crocodiles!" she completed. "Couldn't you have told me sooner?!!?" he called, hanging on to the croc. "Hang on! I'm coming!" she yelled and leapt on the nearest crocodile. She used them as stepping stones to reach him. "Follow me!" she yelled. Kiburi had no choice but to follow her. The two cubs jumped on the crocs and reached the bank safely. The crocodiles hissed after them, angry on losing their free meal. Kiburi had no breath left for talking. But he managed to mumble, "Thanks, Kuona." "Don't mention it." she said. Kiburi knew that they would be good friends. Her voice had gone a lot softer than when he had first bumped into her. The two walked back to Pride Rock. They were greeted by another brown cub looking like Kuona, but with blue eyes.
 
"Kiburi, this is my sister, Nadhari." Kuona introduced them both. "You should meet my cousin, Jasiri." Kiburi told Nadhari. "I'll go get him." Kiburi ran into the den to find Jasiri laying his head against Vitani's body. He put his head up when Kiburi entered. "So, come to apologize, or argue more?" he growled at Kiburi. "About that, sorry bro." Kiburi said. "But I've made some friends I need you to meet." "That's different." Jasiri said. "So, who are these new friends?" Vitani asked. "Their names are Kuona and Nadhari." Kiburi said. "I know them." Kiara said. "They were found abandoned by the hunting party when they were just toddlers. We took them in and one of the lionesses took them in." "As far as I know, they're really nice. It would do the cubs good to make friends with them." Nala said. "Thanks, Mom." Jasiri said as Vitani pushed him forward.
 
Meanwhile, Kuona told everything to Nadhari. "Ku! You know how you put yourself in the danger. You could have been killed today." "But if I didn't go in, Kiburi would've died. And you'd never get to meet Jasiri." Kuona argued. "Good point." Nadhari said. At that moment, Kiburi ran up with Jasiri after him. "Hey Guys." Kiburi said. "This is my big bro, Jasiri. Jasiri, these are my friends, Kuona and Nadhari." "Pleased to meet you." said Nadhari. "The pleasure's all mine." Jasiri replied. "Hey, you guys wanna come and play?" Kuona asked. "Sure," Nadhari replied.  'If you don't mind." "Nah, we don't." Jasiri said. "Instead, we'd gladly play with you." The four cubs ran onto the savannah. Days were getting a whole lot more interesting for Kiburi and his new friends.
 
Chapter 3
 
A hyena ran away from the Pridelands into the Outlands. The Outlands now were full of rocks, ledges and resembled the elephant graveyard. The hyena ran into a separate cave. He slightly shivered from the cold chill of that very cave. The cave was always cold, never warm like the other caves.
 
Kuua sat on a rock ledge, waiting for the hyena. He trembled from her mere looks. "You're late." she said in a rasping voice. "I'm....I'm sorry, Kuua. The Pridelands are crowded with animals; I had to resist the urge to stop and pick some." he shivered. "QUIET!" Kuua roared. The cave shook with the wrath of her voice. "Tell me what you saw." "There's news of a new cub for Kovu. Its still not born yet, but his cub evaded our crocodile attack." the hyena hesitated. "I knew it." Kuua  stood up and paced. "Crocodile attacks aren't good enough to take those cubs down. We need something bigger, a better plan." 
 
"You're taking this too seriously." a voice echoed. Kuua looked back to see another hyena, much larger than the one that stood in front of her. "What do you want?" she snapped at him. "Easy." the hyena replied. "I'm this pack's leader. I know how you can get your revenge on Simba." "Simba." she repeated his name bitterly. "He killed Zira." "Who's Zira? " the pack leader asked. She turned on him with an evil look in her eyes. Her two scars seemed to tingle along with her expression. "Zira...." her voice faltered. "She was the only mother I had in the whole world." "What about your real parents." the leader asked. "They didn't love me." Kuua cut in. "My father hated me. He gave me these two scars on my right eye because he got angry." "What about your mother?" the leader asked. "She didn't care about me. She resented me from the moment I was born. They're the reason I'm here after all." Kuua snapped. " Do you know what its like?" "Your life is none of my concerns." The Alpha replied and walked away, leaving Kuua angrier than before.
 
Kuua paced the length of the Outlands, thinking of a new way to get rid of Kiburi and Jasiri. "If Kopa's dreaded son becomes king," she muttered to herself. " everything will fall. He doesn't know how to be a king." "How do you know Kopa?" the Alpha asked her. He had been lying down right beside her. "Zira had killed him, but he came back." Kuua growled. Her claws clinked on the stone she walked on. Everytime she came near, hyenas would run and hide. She left them trembling in their fur. Her blood-red eyes blazed at the thought of Kopa. "I'm gonna need your help." she turned to the Alpha. "The Pridelands will fall. I'm gonna need you and your hyenas to set another trap for the cubs. If they get hurt, Simba will feel the place is too unsafe for the cubs and will move out." "What if your plan doesn't work?" "Then I will destroy everything. I will do what it takes to honour Zira's memory. Her spirit will rule the land and we will do everything to get her back." Kuua's eyes flashed with the idea of ruling the Pridelands beside Zira.
 
 
Contest Rules:
 
1: No fighting or squabbling among yourselves.
2: No romance or mushy stuff.
3: Death of any character is absolutely imperative.
4: No use of my fanfic elsewhere.
5: no copying from other writers.{I'm watching!!!}
6: Prizes will be decided later. {Or maybe never!! I'm serious. It is just for fun. If you guys can help me it would be seriously appreciated.}


Deadline for this contest : September 01, 2011



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August 19, 2011
India Female
I'm closing this contest guys, I've got the story so there's no need to keep this contest going on.

August 12, 2011
India Female
thx

July 18, 2011
Belgium Female
Love the story

June 27, 2011
India Female
of course, Jasiri is Vitani and Kopa's cub. Kiburi is Kiara and Kovu's cub. He calls Jasiri "bro" because they're cousins.

June 23, 2011
Usa Female
AppleDash>You
and then... it says that kiburi said something and then it says jasiri tried to calm down his brother... meaning kiburi... but kiburi's kovu and kiara's cub... then jasiri calls kopa dad and vitani calls jasiri her son...:/:

June 23, 2011
Usa Female
Anti-BaltoSource
It has a good concept but it is very confusing it does come off as if Jasiri is Kopa and Kiara's cub, quiet a few times, however the term "bro" i think she used in the slang term, which a lot of guys use to address their guys friends.

June 23, 2011
Usa Female
AppleDash>You
but Jisiri calls kiburi "bro"

June 22, 2011
Belgium Female
jasiri is vitani's and kopa's cub, and kiburi is the cub of Kovu and Kiara i think :p i love this

June 22, 2011
Usa Female
AppleDash>You
hmm... i got confused. jasiri is kopa and kiara's cub? and why is he saying uncle kovu? that would mean that kiara or kopa would have to be the sibling of kovu...:o




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