It is a very sweet and touching story. I loved reading it very much, mate. You say that this is your first fanfic and I think that you write very well. And this is a very good fanfic so I don't know why you think that it isn't. Just remember that a good story doesn't have to be very complex with detail and advanced wording; but one that has good dramatic and heartfelt sequences. You did this well. Love the fox kits too. They are very sweet. Keep up the excellent work, mate.

It was a sweet story. Everyone ended up together. I love it

Love it. Keep up the good work. By the way, I love the names of the fox kits.

Ah, thanks for pointing out my mistakes. I may have accidentally added Squeaks into the list, because I never had any intention to add him into this story. As for things flowing so smoothly with Copper and the twins, I guess I got a little impatient and left out a few important parts...A big mistake that was. I may edit this one day, but right now I'm working on other stories and can't really be bothered. This story is kinda old, it's been sitting in my documments folder for about four months now.

Very sweet, although I have to wonder if the introductions would go quite so smoothly when the twins' first impression of Copper was him almost killing them. Still, it makes for a nice, feel-good story. I give it two thumbs up.

By the way, where was Squeaks? He's listed in the characters, but I didn't see him in the story.

Thanks very much! ^^ This is my first attempt at a Fox and the Hound fanfiction, so it isn't very good. My fanfics that I'm planning to post on Balto and Brother Bear source will hopefully be better.

A good story, Very enjoyable! Can't wait to read more from you! (: