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this is my last story on my character Suar.
it is a sequel to my previous three stories.
quick review of my three stories: Suar is balto's half sister who always hated balto because he used to get all the attention from their mother. suar had a very unhappy childhood: she lost her father, and then her mom, Aniu, fell in love with a dog and had three pups with him. Later the dog killed Aniu and all the pups except from Balto, because he looked like a dog. Suar wasn't killed only because she was away and when she returned her family was dead. Suar tried to kill Balto but her step father saw her doing that, so Suar had to run away. Four years later she met Balto again and told him the reason he lost his family, hiding the fact that she tried to kill Balto.

"Whatever happens...don't cross the line" is the last story about Suar. quick description: strange things started happening in Nome since Suar started living with Balto. No one knows why. but then Balto finds out why Suar wanted to meet him - she did somethings she should never have done - still seeking for revenge Suar killed one of Balto's kids. Spirits got angry with Suar and the only way she can expiate her guilt is to confess in everything that she did to Balto.

here are first 2 chapters:
Chapter 1.
THE VICTIMS

Balto was on his way to Jenna’s house. Jenna was feeling ill for the last three days and Balto had to visit her every day. He didn’t know what was wrong with Jenna, so he was very worried about her. When he was about to reach her house, someone called his name. It was Boris, the goose. Balto turned around and smiled at Boris.
“Hey, Balto, can I have a word with you.” Boris asked
Balto came over to him. “Yes, what’s up?”
“Strange things are happening, Balto.” Boris whispered in Balto’s ear.
“What’s wrong?” Balto asked the goose.
“Didn’t you notice anything? Since Suar came to Nome, something weird started happening. Jenna for example…” Boris didn’t finish his sentence, because Balto interrupted him.
“What are you talking about?! Jenna is just a bit ill and it got nothing to do with Suar.”
“It is not just Jenna. Every time I talk to Suar, I feel very cold inside and I am just scared of her. I know she won’t do any harm to me, but it feels as though she has a curse on her!” Boris looked frightened, but Balto just gave him a funny look.
“Can you explain me what is in your mind? There is nothing wrong with Suar, and that thing about the curse that you just said is nonsense!”
“Oh, you don’t understand me, do you?” Boris got angry with Balto.
“I think you need some rest, Boris.” Balto smiled.
Boris gave up and left Balto. Balto ran up to Jenna’s house and knocked on the window. A red husky came up to the window and opened it. The husky looked very ill and exhausted.
“Hi, Jenna. Do you feel any better?” Balto asked.
“Oh…well…I don’t know what’s wrong with me and neither does my girl Rose, but I think I am just too tired.”
“You say no one knows what’s wrong with you?” Balto got worried.
“Balto, I know that you know that I will be alright, and that is what I need – your support. Don’t worry too much.”
“Jenna, you think that I am blind? Yesterday when I came to visit you in the morning you looked better! I am bloody worried, because I don’t want anything to happen to you.”
“Nothings will happen to me, because I have your love that protects me.” Jenna licked Balto’s cheek, but Balto still looked very frightened and didn’t say anything to Jenna. “If Kodi or others will ask about me, just say them, that I am fine.” Jenna added.
“But you’re not fine.” Balto said very quietly.


Chapter 2.
REUNION WITH FAMILY (a flashback to the time, before Suar met Balto)

Suar was wandering in the dark forest. She had to live alone for the last four years. Her home was the dark forest that she used to never leave. This day Suar felt lonelier than ever.
“How long have I got left of this miserable life? Why is it happening to me and why am I the one to suffer after all that happened? I am the innocent one that fights for justice and this is what I get. After all these years I have cooled down inside and I am not seeking for revenge anymore. I feel sorry for my deeds and I wish I didn’t try to kill Balto! In fact I wish I was killed along with my family.” Suar used to talk to herself, because there was no one else to talk to. She sat down on the ground and looked up at the sky. “Where is this all gonna end?” She asked herself.
“It will end soon.” Someone answered.
“Aaah?” Suar turned around and stood up straight away. Behind her she saw big white female wolf. “Who are you?” She muttered.
“Did you forget me already?” the white wolf asked.
“I…never knew you.”
“Really? My own daughter doesn’t remember me!” the white wolf turned away.
“You can’t be my father, can you?” Suar asked the white wolf.
“No, I am not your father, Suar.” The white wolf sounded disappointed.
“You can’t be my mom, coz she die long time ago.” Suar felt very said when she mentioned her mother.
“Her body may be dead, but her soul is immortal.” The white wolf said.
“I don’t believer you.”
“Did I say anything incredible?”
“Leave me alone!” Suar insisted.
“Do you want to get out of this life once forever?” Suar didn’t reply anything. “Your niece, Aleu has a pack on the other side of the ocean. I am sure that she won’t mind one more wolf joining her pack.”
“Who the hell is my niece?” Suar asked.
“The daughter of Balto. She is a wolf as well.” The white wolf smiled.
“She can’t be. Balto is not a wolf, so how can she be a wolf?”
“I am a wolf thought. But anyway, come to the seashore, and there you will see the ice bridge that leads to that side of the ocean.” The white wolf said and disappeared.
Suar didn’t move. She didn’t know whether to believe the stranger or not. However, she decided to check it. When Suar came to the coast, there was an ice bridge that led across the ocean.
“The white wolf didn’t lie…” she said and crossed the ocean.

FINELY! I love this story! Great JOB MORE!!

It's great!!









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