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Title: Some one Better

Category: Relationship/ lover or other

Rating: PG13+

reson for rating: Violence, foul language, love scene

Main Characters:
Jenna (c) universal
Balto (c) universal
Loaka (c) to me

Summery:
Balto has founf some one better than Jenna. A young husky. But not just any, no, this husky is Steele's Mate, Loaka. Loaka and her human family left her mate Steele back in Fairbanks. New in Nome she is aware that Balto is an evil dog(or so her mate told her) so she keeps an eyes out. But, a hansome young wolfdog takes her around and gets to know her and she begins to fall in lova as does Balto. Soon the two are insepribal and become mates but what about jenna? She doesnt know that Loaka exsists until one horribal night.

Teaser:
A new family had moved into Nome Alaska, as Balto walked by their new house he couldn’t help but notice the new-comer in town. A gorgeous dark and light grey husky with a black tip on her tail. She looked over towards Balto. Her beautiful blue eyes shimmered in the light of the sun like crystal clear water.
Balto's heart melted as she gave a warming smile that was directed at him. What are you doing?! Balto thought. You’re with Jenna and you'll be with her forever! Not the new girl. Balto cleared his throat and walked over to the new girl.
"Ah, hi." He started "I couldn’t help but notice that you were new here. Would you like me to take you around?"
"Hello." She said her voice sounded like the quire of a thousand angels, Balto couldn’t help but develop feelings for her.
"I would like to but I've got to settle in first. Maybe tomorrow?"
"Sounds good." Balto said but it wasn’t good Balto wanted to know her more.
"By the way my name is Loaka, what’s yours?"
"I-" Balto was cut off but Loaka's owners calling her.
She sighed "Oh, I have to go. Meet me back here tomorrow?"
Balto nodded.
"Ok, see you then." She said and ran to her owners. Loaka, what a pretty name. Balto thought.

DUDE Stop it! MORE PLEEAASE!

Ok, here is some more.

That evening Jenna walked onto Balto’s boat.
“Balto.” She called.
Balto’s ears flickered “Jenna?” he whispered. Balto stood up and walked over to his mate. She nuzzled him. “Balto, would you like to take a walk on the beach?”
Balto folded his ears.
"Balto what’s wrong?" Jenna asked worriedly.
Balto didn’t want to tell her the truth; he had to make up a lie. "I just, feel bad."
"About what?"
"Oh, I was mad at Kodi and Aleu when they left and well-" He was cut off by a warm lick on his cheek.
"Balto, don’t worry, I feel bad too but what they did was wrong now, come on."
Balto nodded and followed Jenna out to the beach. They both walked along the edge, were the waves pulled in and stopped. Other than the water bushing against the sand of the low tide, everything seemed... Still. No birds, gulls, barking of dogs or anything it was as if he and Jenna were the last two in Nome.

YAY! Great job, Balto is kinda of oh no. lol KEEP GOING!!!! I think I got addcited...

Thanks ^^ i'll make a vid on it really quick.

YAY! You are my friend! More of a fan of your writing...Still friend. If I'm getting to jumpy say down boy or beat me with a stick.

Thanks It wont have any edited pics on it but heres a fanfic teaser to see how Loaka looks.

http://baltosource.timduru.org/affArt-l ... ong-1.html

I think i'll use this pic in the vid XD

HOOLLAALUA! Thanks!^^!

sure thing heres the vid!

http://media.putfile.com/Some-one-Better

Oh, man now the fic from interesting to a sad...Great Job!