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 Post subject: The Wanderers- You've Got To Read This
PostPosted: Sun Oct 15, 2006 12:50 pm 
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The Wanderers

Chapter 1

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The Wanderers Pack-

Somewhere in the mist of the night, two new packs were to meet. Spirit, the alpha female of a Nomadic Wolf Pack, was investigating the Wanderers Wolf Pack. Unknowing, she was being watched by Kiavan, the beta of the Wanderers Wolf Pack. Spirit stood and watched the pack curiously. Unknowing, that Kiavan was really watching her.

He decided to move in closer, and he walks right up, and crouches next to Spirit. He sits and watches his pack along with her. Spirit never realizes that he is crouching next to her. He then turned his head toward her silently, and he says curiously, "Watcha doin?" When Spirit realizes someone is next to her, she instantly pins him to the ground, without walking up the sleeping pack. Kiavan doesn't resist, and he says whispering, "Hey, I wasn't going to attack you, I just wanted to know why you were stalking my pack." She says, "Your pack?" "Well, not my pack exactly", he said. Kiavan was about to do a warning growl to his pack, when he went to that, she instantly jumped off him. Kiavan instantly begins to interrogate her. "Who are you", he asked sternly with his bright green eyes. Spirit replies saying, "My name is Spirit of one the Nomadic Packs." "I was just curious of the pack, its not like I would attack you guys alone", is what she replied.

At that instant, a gold wolf with bright red eyes, and two black wolfs with red eyes, the leap into the scene instantly, ready to attack. Waking up, the rest of the pack. Kiavan looks clinically at the yellow wolf, and says sarcastically, "Well, isn't this just wonderful." Spirit looks at Kiavan confusingly, and says, "It is?" Kiavan looks at her sarcastically, and says, "Sarcasm's a foreign language to you isn't it?" "Now it is", she says as she rubs against him. Tioga takes over the situation, Tioga is the Alpha Female of The Wanderers Pack.

She says viciously, but calmly, "Whiteclaw what are you doing here?", and Alcoum says, "You never been known to frontally attack another wolf pack." Shadow adds on to that and says, "Ya, usually you attack then all from behind there back." Whiteclaw's minions stay silent, but Whiteclaw answers and says, "You guys tend to look behind your back to often." Crimson says, "Maybe we should just walk backwards." Crimson, Alcoum, and Shadow all laugh. Tioga and Kiavan roll there eyes. Spirit stands next to Kiavan confused. Tioga and Kiavan turn there attention back to Whiteclaw. Kiavan says to Whiteclaw, "At the risk of repeating Tioga, what are you doing here?" Then Spirit's Pack, walks into the scene ready to attack both packs in order to protect her. Spirit then walks over there, and says, "No don't!" Her pack looks at her funny, wondering why she told then to stop, but listened to their orders. Spirit then turned her attention back to Kiavan and Tioga.

Kiavan looks to Spirit, and says, "This your pack?" Spirit replies, "Yes, but some lost last winter." Kiavan says, "Ah", and nods. Then he looks down for a brief moment, and returns his attention to Whiteclaw. Tioga takes charge once again, and tells Whiteclaw, "Leave this territory, and never return!" Whiteclaw laughs, and responds, "What are you going to do?" He puts his head down, and beers his teeth, and he says to his minions, without taking his gaze away from Tioga, and says, "Kill them!" The two twin wolves attacked both packs.

Kiavan leaped towards white claw. Spirit jumped up, and told her pack to attack, so Rose and Topaz started to attack the two twins, while Spirit went to see what happened to Kiavan and Whiteclaw. So, one of the black wolves runs toward Crimson. Crimson leaps over the wolf, and grabs its tail and pulls him to the ground. Whiteclaw dodges Kiavan's attack, and leaps for Kiavan's throat. Kiavan dodges Whiteclaw's attack, and grabs him by the scruff of his neck. Tioga attacks one of the other black wolves, and pins him to the ground, causing him to yelp. Whiteclaw breaks away from Kiavan and heads toward Tioga.

Spirit leaped up and pushed Whiteclaw away from Tioga. Whiteclaw lands into a near by a tree, and with his small pack on the ground, and lying next to a tree, the two packs slowly advance toward him, and Tioga growls at him, and says, "Now leave this place, and never return." Whiteclaw ordered the two twin wolves to leave, and they leave the territory. As the two twin wolves walk by him, he slowly gets up, and turns his head toward Tioga, and says, "We shall meet again." Tioga in response pins her ears back and growled, and Whiteclaw lopes off, following his two followers.

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Great job so far! keep it up! :D

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Chapter 2 coming soon! I want now *cries* Well the longer you wait the more it's worth. Be waiting! 8)

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Your welcome more? Please? I"m getting to near begging here.

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