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I'm making a third story, following after When They Came Home. This will have, as usual, violence, strong love scenes.
. . . . .Kota glanced up at the sound, and saw a few black forms appear at the top of the dunes. Followed by many more. Dust flew as the enemy raced towards his position.. . . .
. . . . . The rocks slipped and he and his adversary tumbled into a brief abyss, snarling and slashing in mid-air. . . . . .
.. . . . . .Was he telling the truth? Kota was unable to tell, but let him up, keeping a close watch to see what he would do. . .
. . . . .a roaring crash echoed through the gorge, intermingled into which were hundreds of yelps and whoops. . . .
. . . . .No, she couldn't. She couldn't let herself cross it. Not when Kota was still fighting for her. . . . .
. . . . .his vision went fuzzy, blood rushing from his head to the rest of his body so quickly that he felt light-headed. Then a frightening blackness closed in on him. . . . .
like it?? I hope this was more "grabbing" than my last teaser. I don't know when I'll be finished but it's not going to be like a month or anything. (I hope)
(Oh, and mods who are reading this, I just wanted to apologize about the reason I got banned. . .that was my fault that I said those things and I can't really blame it on anything else.)
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