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 Post subject: The Journey Beyond
PostPosted: Thu Sep 28, 2006 5:25 pm 
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This is the first chapter of my first fic on the site. This fic will have about 12-15 chapters, so keep an eye on this topic, you never know when I'll post the next chapter! :wink: Anyways, after I finish this one, my next fic will be a Balto one, and I'm not sure what I should do for it, but please feel free to give me ideas for that Balto fic, and if I use it, I'll give credit to you for coming up with the basic idea of it, I promise. :) Hope you like it!

Chapter One: The "Seemingly" Harmless Stroll

One dark and stormy evening, Darling and Flame were taking a stroll around town. Darling was new here, and Flame thought it should be his duty to show her around. She smiled and fluffed up her fur when he wasn't looking. She was starting to like him, and hoped he felt the same.

Flame turned to Darling and winked at her,"I know it's a dark night, but this was the only time I could show you," he said.
Darling nodded and scooted closer to him and asked, "So,uh, where are we going, might I ask?"
Flame answered her softly,"My secret haven, which I have never shown anyone," he chuckled to himself evilly, then pretended like nothing happened.
Darling cocked her head to the side, but told herself there was nothing to worry about.

Flame then walked to an empty bus stop and pressed a button. Out of nowhere, a city bus came up from the ground, and parked closely to the curb.
Flame opened the doors and said,"Ladies first, especially beautiful ones."
Darling blushed and stepped gracefully into the bus. There were tons of other creatures sitting in the bus too, she rubbed her eyes, then they were gone.
Flame smiled and spoke eerliy,"We'll be soon be there.."

Darling began to be afraid, "Uh, maybe I should go home now.." She started to back up and push the doors open, but they wouldn't budge.
Flame cornered her and laughed maniaclly,"You're gone now! We've reached the destination, you belong to me!"
Darling let out a scream of terror and froze.

Soon, the bus landed, but to Darling's surprise it was at an island of "paradise". She unfroze and stepped onto the sand. She smiled and forgot all about Flame's evil plot. He followed behind her and the bus took off at hypersonic speed into the sky. Darling started to walk into the ocean, and right as she did, she passed out.

END CHAPTER ONE


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PostPosted: Sat Sep 30, 2006 7:21 am 
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I noticed several people viewed this, but didn't make any comments. So I will! I loved the first chapter and I can't wait for the next one! You left me hanging, and that makes me angry! :twisted: Jk, but it's very interesting so far. I wonder what happens to Darling... :lol:


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Yay! People actually read it! :)


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Lunawings wrote:
Hey that's interesting! :D I too wounder what happends to Darling...XD


yeah it sounds sooo good

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