THE TALBOURNE TRILOGY PART TWO: THE UNIEA WAR!

Rotramel the Writer · **Posted:** Sun Jun 19, 2005 8:01 pm

Here it is, hope you enjoy it!
About the poll...
If you mark "you should change something for part 3" tell me what you would like to see changed. (leave a post)
Now it's on to The Talkeet Trilogy Part Three: Father and Son.
For now though, here's part two, The Uniea War.
Hpe you like it!

To save space on the forums, this fanfic was deleted. But you can read it on the site, in the Fan Fiction section!

Rotramel the Writer · **Posted:** Sun Jun 19, 2005 8:03 pm

Watch for Part 3 of The Talkeet Trilogy: Father and Son, Coming Soon from Rotramel USMC!

Rotramel the Writer · **Posted:** Sun Jun 19, 2005 11:42 pm

Sorry about the double post guys, but I had to put this up.
I'm going to hold off on writing Outbreak.... "When Love Isn't Enough" is going to be too much fun to write.
I just came up with this idea (this may change in the final product)

"I HATE YOU!" Kodi screamed at Dusty, "I MEAN, HOW... HOW COULD YOU DO THIS TO ME?!"
Dusty said nothing.
Kodi shook his head, and turned, walking toward the door, then he stopped and faced her.
"GET OUT NOW!"
"Kodi..." Dusty started.
Kodi cut her off.
"NO DUSTY, IT'S PAST FIXING NOW, JUST GET OUT OF MY SIGHT!"
Tears flowed down Dusty's face.
"But... but Kodi, I... I love you."
Kodi glared at her.
"Love isn't enough anymore."
Dusty hung her head, and walked out the door, into the blowing snow.
Kodi watched until he could no longer see her, then he slammed the door, fell on the floor, and cried.

What do you think?

Ninetalesuk · **Posted:** Mon Jun 20, 2005 7:12 am

Excellent second story and excellent preview.

Lone Wolf_fanwriter · **Posted:** Mon Jun 20, 2005 2:42 pm

OH...MY...GOSH!!! THAT WAS INCREDIBLE! It really reminds me of Star Wars III, which, if I recall, is where you got your inspiration?
Anyway, I loved it! Great job and good luck on Part III.
Aaaaaaaaaannndddd.... I really liked the little clip of When Love Isn't Enough. Its just the sort of teaser that I'd pull off. Hehheh!

Bueno suerte! (Good luck!)

Lone Wolf_fanwriter · **Posted:** Mon Jul 04, 2005 4:57 pm

Um, what was the point of reposting Rotramel's story, Dingowolf?

Dingowolf · **Posted:** Tue Jul 05, 2005 4:54 pm

well srry about that Rotramel it was an kind of an acceident

Gemini Syndrome · **Posted:** Sun Jul 17, 2005 9:50 pm

Grand show mate, grand show! Levity: I really enjoyed both segments of this fic so far, and highly look forward to the third segment! also the next fic you've got planned looks like a suspenceful read too..

Yes I know I've probably said the same thing about your other stuff, but this was just too good to let slide that easily!

Nice preview of the upcoming works you've got in store for everyone!

Also, While I'm still thinking about it, when will the third segment be out? because this one looks like it will be a barnburner of a read!

-Lowes

Rotramel the Writer · **Posted:** Mon Jul 18, 2005 9:02 pm

Part III is done, and in it's own Topic.
HOPE YOU ENJOY READING IT AS MUCH AS I DID WRITING IT!

Fuya · **Posted:** Fri Jul 09, 2010 10:46 am

Good story.

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THE TALBOURNE TRILOGY PART TWO: THE UNIEA WAR!