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Post subject: My fic Posted: Wed Sep 13, 2006 5:49 pm |
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This is the story about a wolf dog is bullied by a dog, has a human friend but is rejected by his parents. He meets a female dog, who becomes his fun friend and the bully kindnaps the kid, the two go out to find him. The wolfdog discovers his spirit guide and the three get the kid back and the the wolfdog is accpted by the family.
Tell me what you think (This is the only personal story I have completed)
I am Pascal, a "nearly normal" dog. Is my handicap a physical or mental disability? Close, but I'll tell you, I'm half wolf as well. If you add that up you've got a wolfdog. I’m shunned and mocked. Before I go rambling I’ll tell you what I remember of my past (Story):
I was walking along around the streets. I was looking for my only friend, a young boy named Noah. There was also one dog to watch out for, McKinley, A nasty Akita/Samoyed mix that hated me, and tortured me. I sniffed around when I found that special scent. I found Noah alone, just sitting on a crate and He saw me. I lowered my head so he could pet me “How you doing boy.” He said in a friendly, cool way. Now this was a bit of a guilty pleasure for both of us, because Noah’s parents hated me. After a while, Noah’s mom came out and said “Time to go inside Noah!” She called out. She looked around and she found him and she caught me as well “Noah! Never go near that horrid beast!” She screamed and before Noah could do anything with me again, she picked Noah up and was carrying him inside the house . The father came out and kicked me in the torso “You don’t belong with my son, you freak dog!”. Knowing the fun was over and I couldn’t win. I walked away, sadly. Then I bumped into something or rather someone. I thought “It can’t get any worse, unless.....” and I looked up and their was my worst enemy McKinley. He said in a nasty tone “Watch where the hell, your going wolfdog.” I stuttered “I-I’m sorry.” “Better be. Next I see you anywhere your dead!” He growled as I sat there dejectedly. Not much was going to happen so I found my way into the basement of the hospital. Where Balto and Jenna were quite some years ago. I pulled up a grey blanket that covered my body and waited till I fell asleep.
Next day
Today I woke up. I couldn’t visit Noah, for a while his parents found my showing up with Noah more and more predictable. It became tighter for both of us with each visit. There was always the danger of McKinley so I had to look out for him always. I sleep in a hidden place where neither of them knows. Not that Noah’s parent’s care, but McKinley is still out their. I got up, yawned and went out to find breakfast. I had find most of my food off trash cans, Nasty isn’t it? Well that’s my life, as a fact I have seen stray dogs that have been fortunate to make friends with humans, like the butcher, in return they get food when they drop by, lucky dogs. Well I crawled out and there were my local trash cans. I licked my lips as I was about to find out what there to eat. Then I heard a yawn. I looked and shortly found a dog, just laying there. She was kind of hard to see because she blended in with the snow. She saw me and stood up. She stood up all fours and said “Who are you?” I was shocked, no dog had ever asked me that. I replied to this stranger “Pascal” “The names Angel. What are you doing?” She asked “Getting Breakfast, I’m a stray.” I asked “Do you have an owner” “Does it looked like I have a collar?” She joked. She was awake now, her ears raised, and kinda curved, but close to her head. To me it looked a “Far away seagull pattern” with Angel’s head in the middle. I scanned her body. “You must be like me, a stray also.” “What you’re reason? I’m part wolf so almost everyone rejects me.” “I never liked humans. I was mistreated in the past when having human owners. Almost everybody? Who do you know besides me?” She asked “Well, A boy named Noah. That’s all. You hungry because unless you can get us some food from humans, our only choice the trash can .
“I told you, I have no human friends. Now let’s start digging.” So I grabbed the lid “After you” I said after tossing the lid away on the ground. The lid gave a clang. Angel had an idea “Let’s eat all the edible contents of this garbage, you get I get half. We started eating, I was too hungry to talk. When we ate most of it we both fell in. We laughed and finished the remains of the trash I figured the only way out was to tip the trash can over. “Okay angel, let’s push this thing over” Angel tried but surprisingly it was easier than I thought, maybe it had something to do with my wolf half, being stronger than I realized . It fell over with a bang and Angel and I squeezed out. I said “Hey let’s go bone digging for dessert.” “Yeah, I have a stash somewhere.” Angel replied “Where are the bones?” Pascal asked. “Follow me” Angel said. Now in the corner McKinley was listening and sometimes peeking. As they left, he said “So Pascal has a Girlfriend to lighten up his life. I just have to find his big weakness so he’ll surrender to me, once and for all!”
Angel and I walked a short distance “Come on tell me.” I said excitedly and playfully. “Come on, you’ll see” Angel said. Angel led me to the basement of the P.O . She started digging in the corner. “So that’s where it is?” I asked “Yup.” she said as she found the bones. She took out two and reburied the bone stash. She held the bones in the mouth. One them sideways. Pascal Grabbed on that one and angel let go, for she had another one in her mouth. “Thanks, Angel.” Pascal said as the left the place “No problem, thanks for the big breakfast.” She replied “Your welcome” I replied. Again McKinley showed up. “Hey wheres the party and I get some.” Inside I was blazing with anger, though somehow it didn’t show. It was all inside of me. “Oh it’s you wolfdog. Get outta here.” Then he saw Angel “Hehe, Hi young lady. Why don’t we leave this pest and go out together?” McKinley said. “I don’t know who you are, and you’re being mean to Pascal, so NO!” Angel rejected McKinley. McKinley was furious, he was to slash me. Angel blocked him “Try me first, if you want to hit my friend. You won’t hit me, because you want to go out with me!” Angel told him off. I walked away, Angel joined me. McKinley stuck his tongue out and blew a raspberry. Angel gave a nasty look, that inside shooken him. Angel said “You have to be tough, stand up for yourself.” Angel said. I didn’t feel like talking. McKinley walked away muttering. “I’ll take that Noah boy of yours, see how you feel.”
Later something was going on around town. I got a letter, that showed what it was about. I read it to Angel.
Dear wolfdog:
I know how to settle this bet, I have the boy, Noah as they call him. Turn in yourself and your girlfriend and the boy is fine to go. Try anything funny and the boy’s dead. I’ll send one my thugs to guide you if decide to accept. He’ll be in the front of Noah’s porch tomorrow at noon. I’m keeping the boy if you don’t come.
Sucker!
McKinley
“Look he signed his name. At least we Know who’s responsible” Angel commented. I was very sad for Noah and having unimaginably Angry at McKinley. I ran out of town into the forest. I just sat by a tree. Angel came along with Me. “What’s wrong?” She said “You know what.” I said grouchily. “I know what you’re thinking.....literally.” I was in a surprised manner “Wait, what does mean?” “It means, that I can see into ones thoughts.” She answered “I knew what kind of person you and McKinley were as soon as I came in contact with either of you” She added. “Well before wasn’t it that...” She started “That I was part wolf?” I said “Hey, I’ll admit there not as bad as you think.” Angel said “I personally like them.” He said. “That’s why your attracted to me? My wolf side is a turn on to you?” I asked. “Yeah.” “I like you as well.” I said to angel. The same feeling of Anger and sadness was came back. Even though I felt better with this conversation, still to realize my friend is psychic, I don’t know if that’s cool or weird. “Listen, I need some time to think. Can you leave me alone for this matter?” I asked Angel “I understand, but I want to ask. Are we friends?” She asked. I replied “Of course.” Angel wandered away but I could still see her.
I also wandered around, when I saw something odd. A Brown wolf was sitting on a tree branch. “Hello Pascal.” He greets me. I back away “Who are you?” I asked. “I am your spirit guide, known as Azulu. I am here to help you.” “What I don’t have any.” I replied “Don’t be afraid of me or to admit whats happening, I can’t help you unless we talk.” I decided to talk. Azulu jumped down from the tree only to crash down into the ground. The upper half his body went through the Earth. He got up and said “Tell me.” I said “I’m part wolf, I’ve been hated by everybody by it.” Azulu nodded. I continued “I Know this boy who likes me but my parents hate me and this enemy named McKinley....” I explained everything that had happened. Azulu listened and never interrupted me. Never Criticizing or praising anything “The first part is accepting that your wolf, it’ll be there forever. If you can accept it, you’ll have a better attitude, more belief in yourself. I accept what you are, you’ll learn who you are.” She said. “About your situation, I suggest you talk to your friend Angel. She’ll help you think it out.” He said “Come with me” He asked “Where?” I asked “You’ll see.” I followed him to the edge of the forest. We stood at the forest. We looked at the stars. Then He started Howling “He said. Sing with me, Sing with your brother the wolf.” He said. I didn’t want to but when I saw the moon. Yellow and bright and full, something went off. I don’t know if was that I wanted to move on or something else.... Azulu smiled and we howled together. “Now you see? Howling is part of wolf nature.” Azulu said. I felt a little better, and it sounded so cool. Angel was right. Then I though all those years I had rejected being a wolf and If felt ashamed. I felt different... Azulu said “Go, your friend is waiting.” I asked “Thanks, and Azulu?” “Yes?” HE replied “Will I be able to see you? Like right now?” He replied “No, but you’ll know when I’m there.” I was confused “What?!” I said “You’ll see..You’ll see.” He said as the wind circled around him and he disappeared, the wind scattered in all directions. “Wait, are you my friend?” I yelled into the sky. A vocie exactly like Azulu’s said “Yes, I am your spiritual friend, your conscience..”
Then I walked back, I saw Angel were we had first arrived in the forest. She laying on her stomach, resting. She became aware of arrival. Rose her head a little and asked “Feeling better?” One of her ears went up, I assumed she was trying to hear hear me from where I was. “Much, but I’m still concerned about Noah.” “I suggest we go. Angel said “To sacrifice ourselves?” I asked “No I have something different in mind.” Angel said I became worried “But the letter said...Noah would die if we did anything else.” “Well not going there, won’t do any good. McKinley will keep Noah. Besides I think McKinley’s a trouble making Coward.” Angel said “He’s all tough and mean....” I said “That he’s just a fake, remember when he tried to attack you and I blocked him, he wouldn’t do anything. Even if we show up, he won’t do anything, unless he is that heartless to kill him.” He said I started to catch on “He tried to get you to date him, leaving me alone. Then he got really mad and tried to attack me, but you stepped in. He was afraid to attack because he afraid you wouldn’t do out with him, and he would damage his Image” Angel said “Exactly. It’s bad enough he was that desperate. Again, he’ll be banned by the dogs for kidnapping, he’ll only go deeper if he actually kills Noah.” “Lets go back to town, so in the morning we meet the guy that will take us to McKinley and Noah.” She suggested. She the ear rested against her head again.
The side of the forest we were in faced Nome. She kept the other ear up this time, to listin for danger. She put it down when we exited the side of the forest that faced nome We Raced back to town. We rather tired, and we found the closest alley to Noah’s house. It turns out the hospital was close to his house, and the post office somewhat farther. I Found the basement. Both of us walked tiredly to my blanket. It was quite big and was wide and tall enough to fit my torso leaving my hind paws, neck and head exposed. I asked “Care to sleep over with me?” I said Kindly. Angel agreed happily. She decided she wanted a separate bed, I thought that splitting the blanket in half would work. We split it in half and we slept next to each other, in short it looked like we were in two grey cloth sleeping bags.
I first got under the sheets. It was bigger than I though for there was another half of the blanket that was unused. When I lived alone, I wrapped it all around my body. Angel slipped in the unused half. She was my size, even though being younger than me. Her neck, head, and hind legs was not covered by the blanket. Her tail stuck out, unlike mine, which I tucked in. We both tired too think about anything and fell asleep instantly.
late Morning of the next day (11:50).
Both of us got up. Neither of us knew the time, but yet somehow we knew the thug was coming. Angel had more of this “feeling” than I did. We got out of the hospital basement. We waited on the right side of Noah’s house. Angel dropped her ears a bit and looked sad “I want to tell you something, I don’t like humans. If Noah takes you in, I won’t follow.” Pascal looked at his friend. He thought about this and remembered something in their conversation when they were first talking. “I understand, seriously. Personally I’m kinda looking forward to Noah being my owner, also having his parents appreciate me.” Angel said “Yeah, we have the same goal. Who know’s what will happen after?” “I have one question, why are you doing this, are you doing it for Noah?” She replied “I’ve never met him and you know very well about my standing point, and experience.”. I nodded Then some short time later. A thug came from the opposite side. It was a fox .He leaned the house and looked around. “Come on, I think that’s him” I said. “Wait, here’s what I’ve got in mind, we follow the thug but we sniff around, just to make sure.” Angel suggested. I agreed to these terms. I went first, with angel right behinf me. The thug saw both of us “Youse Pascal and Angel?” The thug asked. “Yes, I have read McKinley’s letter, and I accept.” “Kay, the boss is going to dere the boy, if you screw up when we get there.” I looked at Angel once more just to make sure of our plan. She gave a firm nod. “Okay let’s go” I said. We walked in a line. The Thug was in front of me. I was in the middle, with angel behind me. Not saying anything we arrived into the wilderness. McKinley was more tricky than I ever thought.
We followed the thug. I kept track by sniffing around and keeping aware. Angel moved up to my right side. It was windy and confusing. The first time I had ever been here. I kept sure of any danger, by McKinley or by Mother nature. When we were deep in the forest, I had no clue if we any closer to the McKinley. I looked at Angel. I wondered if she had any clue of any of this. “See anything?” I asked. Angel eyed me and spoke “Same as you, only much higher.” The fox chuckled nastily “So long, Find the boss for your self!!” He called of and darted off. I was surprised then angry. I dashed to catch the traitor. Angel dashing next to me. Then I smelt something. There was a howl in the air. Before either of us could proceed. A wolf leaped out the trees. Both of us stopped. He sniffed around. “Dang, smelled a fox around here somewhere...” He said “Oh yeah, could tell you two were out here.” “I’m hungry....but not that desperate to eat you two.” He said He glances at Angel “You don’t look like a wolf, so your definitely not from the forest.” He glances at me, but having a confusion “Hey, wolf what pack are you in? I’ve never seen you around here either.” I replied “I’m part dog. We’re from town. We might need some help. Angel could do the honors by you filling him in?” Angel began to speak, about when we first met till now. The wolf looks thoughtful after Angel’s explanation “I might have seen that dog with the boy, when I was going out for hunting. Let’s get back on track.” The wolf leads. I ask “What’s your name?” He replies “Names aren’t important right now” “Will you tell me after?” I ask. He srugs it off “Yeah yeah sure...” He sniffs around. After a few moments he speaks “I think I have that dog’s scent. Come on!” He dashes. I run after him and Angel follows me. The path went deeper and maze like that I was personally confused of where I was.” Then we see what we are looking for, McKinley and Noah.
McKinley and the Thug sit in front of fire laughing “Ha! Can’t believe that sucker followed you.” McKinley Laughed. “Yeah, I know.” The Thug laughs “I know..” and the two were bragging and gloating. The lone wolf faces Angel and I. “Okay, I’ll handle the dog.” He points to Angel “Distract the Fox.” He commands “You, get the boy.” He commands to me. “Ready...now!” The three of us sprung into action. The two stoped laughing “Wait...how did you?” McKinley says. “That’s it.” His voice switches to angry tone. He blocks the tent. “Let the boy go!” I growl. “Please...what are you going do to you....WOAH!” McKinley says in a Sarcastic tone but is then pounced on my the lone wolf. The two go into a fight. Angel is shaking the thug like he’s a chew toy. I go into the tent and see Noah. He’s curled up and he sees me “Couldn’t be happier to see you.” He says. I allow him to lay on my back. I exit the tent. The thug is burning in the fire. Mc kinley flying in the air, dead and lands in the fire. Angel and the lone wolf stand before me. “Mission accomplished.” I Smile. Angel aks the wolf “Can you help us get back to Nome?” She asks. The wolf nods and begins to walk. We followed behind him.
The wolf led us to entrance of the forest. “Goodbye.” He bows. Then a strange thing happens. His color melts away, leaving a clear blob of the shape of a wolf. The transforms into the snow. “Thank you” I say to the sky then to Angel. We travel back to Noah’s house.
Noah’s House
Noah’s parents sit in their living room looking depressed. “I wish noah was back...” The mom says sadly. Then they hear some barking. They see me, Noah and Angel. “Noah!” Noah’s dad calls out with relief. The Mother sees noah and rushes to the door. The dad picks noah off my back . “Welcome back son.” He says. The mom notices me, as well as Angel. “Thank you so much, for our boy!” She says with gratitude. Noah asks “Can I keep him?” Noah’s mom replies “He’s part of our family now, of course you can. After what he’s done. The dad pats my head “Forgive me, for what happened beofre, will ya?” Noah says “Pascal doesn’t sound like a good name to me. How about Kody.” The three go inside. I do the same, when I turn around to face Angel. “Well, my friend. I guess this is farewell. I want to live with Noah. As I know...you want to live as a stray.” “Thank you also, and yes, we understand each other quite well. Goodbye.” She heads off but gives me a wink and a cute ,sweet, and charming smile. She is kinda cute...think I’m in love here especially that intimate night, ooh McKinley would be jealous. I smiled in a happy friendly way. I depurated into Noah’s house. “Well take care of my old home ‘home’.” I called out. I went into Noah’s House.
I was in the living room, when I see a bright, pale Azulu standing in front of the fireplace. “Well done.” She congratulated me. I asked “I now have an owner, Angel doesn’t want one, but what about you? Who is your owner?” The sprit replied “I don’t have one, nor a master. Wolves become sprits when they die.” After she said this, she disappeared and I fell back asleep. No more adventure, I just want to settle to normal life....
Epilogue: Well McKinley and his thug is died Noah’s family has learned to accept me. I do have to say that Angel is my love .Azulu was like a sister to me. Now, I sit gnawing on a bone. Was it that I had made this all up or this true? you decide
End
Credits (Names sorted Alphabetically):
Angel- Jane Alan
Azulu- Tifanie Christun
Lone wolf- Balto (The Real dog, not the cartoon wolf dog.)
McKinley – David Wills
Noah- Myles Jeffrey
Noah’s dad- Tom Kenny
Noah’s mom- Mona Marshall
Pascal- Steven Jay Blum
Thug-Keone young
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Post subject: finding Balto Posted: Fri Sep 15, 2006 9:53 pm |
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I'm going to write a follow up this, and this is a relival of my pevious story. I will try to finish it, as I am busy and ideas come and go quickly.
Preface
Life had settled down, Pascal and Angel were certainly friends. Pascal was happy he had a friend, a few. It felt good. He was in the living room of the Alsakan house of the Beatersons, the family that had addopted him. Pascal was a wolfdog, could be described as an odd looking Huskey. His day was a normal one, Pascal observes the activties of his new masters.
(Part 2, starter rough line of story
Chapter 1- A New life
Life has Taken a change, I had a feeling it was good one, but also very strange. The humans have let me into their family, because I haven’t had good experience with humans or other animals in my life.
As I remember, when I first entered the house, it was a new place, a place of new scents. My first feeling was to explore the place, ignoring the humans I checked out different areas. I was filled with wonder what all these strange objects were, however I was not interested into playing with them. The excitement and curiosity filled me. The first place I entered was this room, wooden full of things. I walked around to see what it was all like, I sniffed around, but I noticed there was more, I went through many of these areas, each of them a bit different. I sniffed It was a spicy, kind of smell. Then I noticed a hall way
After a while, I walked into a room I had immediately noticed Noah but just as any other room, I looked around. ThenI heard Noah’s voice
“Pascal, you found me, come here boy.” I came because I felt warm and safe with the boy. I walked fondly towards him as I laid down on the floor. He patted me, and rubbed my head. It felt good. from my position I looked around. That was the beginning.
Chapter 2 morning
As the changes went, I realized the humans were trying to make me more dog like, with my life I felt like a dog. All the things the humans did were odd. but I figured I would figure it out in a few days, based on how they treated and structured my life. After things settled down, I began to watch the humans, do things, sometimes participate when all of them were together. Normal days went like this. I get up very early, but humans get up much later so I take a light nap. I was aken easily, I had woken up shortless having a spleep on the surface easily awakon by the rising action of the human. As I heard footseps, I sleepiy awoke. The hmans came in and became busy with their activty. I sleepy yawned and rose my legs. I paeeded around silenty, and watched them. it took a while but when I was noticed they welcolmed me. After their actvities I obeserved that noah was leaving. I rushed to door, not understanding
Chapter 3 A gathering.
“Mom, Pascal wants to come with me! can he can he? Please.” Noah excitiedly plead. Noah’s mom was not sure, but decided to give a shot, she had a bad feeling. “Okay noah, but daddy will have to come with you.” As soon as the door was opned it jumped down the steps and into the snow. I padded along, looking around the town, Noah’s neighboor hood. I noticed that a lot of the other kids were going somewhere, accompanied by a parent if really young, but a brother or sister if a child. I padded and thought “Where are we going?” I trailed along, butt in the allies I could see a white figured dinning in the trash “Angel?” I thought disttractedly. I turned on and we soon got the destination. I arvied at a stop where all the kids were shouting and screaming and talking it was loud, “this is where they went bt why?”, I had a bad feeling about this despitee noah’s company. When I noticed all hushed things passed around like “What is that?” “What is that thing.” “Noah, answred this my dog, he’s a huskey.” I thought “There’s more to that, but it would be an embrassment if the truth was reaviled.”, noah was smart but he didn’t know. Eveybody came to pet me, but ran away, the children dshed, as the older brothers and sister trid to control them. I wanted to get away. I ran away ran back home. The bus arivied and I didn’t say good away. Noah looked angy “You scared my dog away.” He scearmed.
Chapter 4- pnishment and reflection
I ran back, and sta on the porch. I waited, as the father came back. “Bad boy!.!” I did not understand, he let me in the house, only to lead me out, I felt they helped part of me, but only lightly in my whole being. I sat like a sad dog chained, then I remeber Angel “I wanted to sneak away but I knew the conquence already.” I wated outside in the bakc yard as I stared out, the house was on the egdge of town I stared into the forest during these years I have felt lost in my being.... I sat outside, but I began to explore, i wandered, the yard almost like a pen, with high walls. I sat on the porch and waited staring, thinking. Then a event broke the clam solttude I had, the father brought food, a bowl, with water. “Here you go, boy. I’ll see you later.” As he petted me. I eat, it was more than the avarge dog eat, I kinda of specail..
That night
“ That dog, he’s a lot to handle.” “Well we agreed to raise a pet for . Besdies Noah needs to learn.” “Isn’t a huskey enough? THis dog is beyond usual there something odd.” I lisitned “i knew theu were talking about me.” I waited, they let me in, I stayed in the living room but I decided to wander visting to the company of others, but I had plans...
I waited in the living room, listing untill I was sure everybody was asleep, a doggy door was attached so I slipped away in the darkness of the house. I padded down the steps and jumped the fence “Risky, but my being called for a dobleu life.” I snuck around, and paeedy around, I decided to sneak under the building as I found Angel’s home, under one of the buildings. She layed on hwe side, untill she heard someting, she rasied her head to check, but she knew who it was, by her powers. “Wow, you manged to make it here? Your amazing” Angel said. “Just coming over, a visit.” Pascal said. “well, I’ll spend a while with you, we can talk but I have to be back..” We layed down and smiled at each other Best friends....
It has continued on like that for many days but one day was the day that changed everything....
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(Comments, I would like to know this is a dog/wolf dog relationship so far!!!)
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