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Lone Wolf_fanwriter
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Post subject: 'Nother Fanfic: Blood Lust Posted: Sat Jun 18, 2005 5:38 am |
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Hallo, its me again. I have Ninetalesuk to thank for the inspiration for this one. I'm going to call it Blood Lust. Why you ask? Well....
Kodi walked up to her and said,
"Hey, would you-" The brown female spun around and Kodi took a step back. For an instant, he saw fire in her eyes, but it vanished and her expression lightened.
"I'm sorry," she said sweetly, "I thought you were someone else." Someone else? Kodi thought, who?
"I was just wondering... Well, you've been sitting back here all alone and I thought you might need some friends."
"Oh, thank you," she replied, standing up and following him out of the boiler room. As they walked down main street, Kodi asked her,
"So, uh, why'd you move here?"
"Well," she replied, "I...My humans had some problems with our old town."
"Really, where did you come from?"
"Fairbanks, actually."
"Really, my dad's been in Fairbanks for about a week, so he probably ran into you." Or maybe I ran into him, she thought, remembering what she could from a few days before, Well, there was this one brown dog, but he looked almost wolf...
"What does he look like?"
"Oh, you wouldn't have missed him," Kodi replied, "He's grayish-brown, kinda like you, and he's...well, part wolf." That was him, she thought, her face turning pale for a moment, I hope he's still alive...
Okay, there's your teaser. I love cliff hangers! However, I need a name for the female. Any ideas?
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Last edited by Lone Wolf_fanwriter on Sat Jun 18, 2005 10:56 am, edited 1 time in total.
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Ninetalesuk
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Post subject: Posted: Sat Jun 18, 2005 9:12 am |
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I voted first! Because you have done a good teaser here... and the female dog's name... could be Fina...
And why do I have a feeling that this female dog ATTACKED Balto...?
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Jeppers
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Post subject: Posted: Sat Jun 18, 2005 9:52 am |
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Joined: Thu Jun 16, 2005 8:09 pm Posts: 79 Location: I am a cactus hugging fool!!!
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You should write it because its always nice for people to write fan fiction. Oh and for the name maybe you should try usuing some places in Alska as reference just like how universal did. Im not so good at making names my self.
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Jeppers
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Post subject: Posted: Sat Jun 18, 2005 7:01 pm |
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Lol but wouldn't it be better to have it all in one masterpiece then just segments everywhere?
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Ninetalesuk
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Post subject: Posted: Sun Jun 19, 2005 4:52 pm |
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Joined: Fri May 13, 2005 1:23 pm Posts: 148 Location: Southern England
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Just like Betrayal...? Could take a while... but, you have all summer to do it and New Life.
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Rotramel the Writer
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Post subject: Posted: Sun Jun 19, 2005 6:41 pm |
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Joined: Sun Jan 02, 2005 12:36 am Posts: 274 Location: Living with my Family in Arkansas
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I know you said you already had a list, but here's some different names I found on the map.
(Anyone can use these of course)
Elwok
Kutak
Ketok
Nanek
Ekuk
Nondalton
Nakene
Kenai
Knik
Wassila
Talkeetna (Talkeetna Talkeet, see the reference? lol)
Tanana
Nowitna
Koyukuk
There's some.
I always try to use names that have to do with nature (Timbre, Lighting) or native names (Talkeet, June) for the wolves, as they are supposed to be kind of the "indians". I try to use somewhat "normal" sounding names (Dash, Flash, Max, Melody ext.) for the dogs, to make them seem a little more tamed, those are human names, so... well, I won't get into the whole theory of domestication that I think plays a huge role in the story. (If I did, I'd still be typing this time tomorrow.)
Hopefully this will help.
Oh yeah,
THE TALKEET TRILOGY PART TWO: THE UNIEA WAR, IS DONE!
I should have it up as soon as I get done proofing it (an hour or two)
SEMPER FIDELIS!
- PFC Anthony E. Rotramel, USMC
(Rotramel USMC)
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Post subject: Posted: Sun Jun 19, 2005 10:20 pm |
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Sounds good so far. 
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