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 Post subject: 'Nother Fanfic: Blood Lust
PostPosted: Sat Jun 18, 2005 5:38 am 
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Hallo, its me again. I have Ninetalesuk to thank for the inspiration for this one. I'm going to call it Blood Lust. Why you ask? Well....

Kodi walked up to her and said,
"Hey, would you-" The brown female spun around and Kodi took a step back. For an instant, he saw fire in her eyes, but it vanished and her expression lightened.
"I'm sorry," she said sweetly, "I thought you were someone else." Someone else? Kodi thought, who?
"I was just wondering... Well, you've been sitting back here all alone and I thought you might need some friends."
"Oh, thank you," she replied, standing up and following him out of the boiler room. As they walked down main street, Kodi asked her,
"So, uh, why'd you move here?"
"Well," she replied, "I...My humans had some problems with our old town."
"Really, where did you come from?"
"Fairbanks, actually."
"Really, my dad's been in Fairbanks for about a week, so he probably ran into you." Or maybe I ran into him, she thought, remembering what she could from a few days before, Well, there was this one brown dog, but he looked almost wolf...
"What does he look like?"
"Oh, you wouldn't have missed him," Kodi replied, "He's grayish-brown, kinda like you, and he's...well, part wolf." That was him, she thought, her face turning pale for a moment, I hope he's still alive...

Okay, there's your teaser. I love cliff hangers! However, I need a name for the female. Any ideas?

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PostPosted: Sat Jun 18, 2005 9:12 am 
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I voted first! Because you have done a good teaser here... and the female dog's name... could be Fina...

And why do I have a feeling that this female dog ATTACKED Balto...?


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PostPosted: Sat Jun 18, 2005 9:52 am 
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You should write it because its always nice for people to write fan fiction. Oh and for the name maybe you should try usuing some places in Alska as reference just like how universal did. Im not so good at making names my self.


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PostPosted: Sat Jun 18, 2005 12:21 pm 
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Thanks. I've got a list of possible names now. Anyway, I'll keep you posted. A New Life is nearly compliete, and when it is, I'm switching gears to Blood Lust!

About your 'feeling'... Nah, I won't tell you yet. Sorry!

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PostPosted: Sat Jun 18, 2005 5:46 pm 
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Curses! :lol:


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Lol but wouldn't it be better to have it all in one masterpiece then just segments everywhere?


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Thanks for your opinion, but I don't just post random segments, I ussually post my stories chapter by chapter. If everyone wants me to, though, I can wait until its completely done before posting it.

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Just like Betrayal...? Could take a while... but, you have all summer to do it and New Life.


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How true, how true! Plus, A New Life is nearly complete! I've been working on this one for at lest four months. I almost had it finished once, but then I deleted practically everything and started over. Why? I really don't know.
Anyway, this is my last week of school, and we get out EARLY! Therefore, I will write.

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HIDE FOR COVER!!! SHE'LL RIGHT!!! Or he, I dunno... :lol:


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I'm male. And yes, you should duck and cover!

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I know you said you already had a list, but here's some different names I found on the map.
(Anyone can use these of course)

Elwok
Kutak
Ketok
Nanek
Ekuk
Nondalton
Nakene
Kenai
Knik
Wassila
Talkeetna (Talkeetna Talkeet, see the reference? lol)
Tanana
Nowitna
Koyukuk

There's some.
I always try to use names that have to do with nature (Timbre, Lighting) or native names (Talkeet, June) for the wolves, as they are supposed to be kind of the "indians". I try to use somewhat "normal" sounding names (Dash, Flash, Max, Melody ext.) for the dogs, to make them seem a little more tamed, those are human names, so... well, I won't get into the whole theory of domestication that I think plays a huge role in the story. (If I did, I'd still be typing this time tomorrow.)
Hopefully this will help.
Oh yeah,
THE TALKEET TRILOGY PART TWO: THE UNIEA WAR, IS DONE!
I should have it up as soon as I get done proofing it (an hour or two)
SEMPER FIDELIS!

- PFC Anthony E. Rotramel, USMC
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Thanks for the extra names, although now I'm reallly going to have a tough time deciding. Oh well.
Thanks also for the theory on naming. Its a pretty sound idea, and easy to remember!
Yay, Uniea War! :cheers:

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Yay! i cant wait to read it. Ooh this almost makes me wanna write some fan fic but im just too lazy... :?


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Sounds good so far. :D


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