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I'm making a sequel to What Matters Most. The story picks up right where the first one leaves off. Dala and Kota go back to Pride Rock, but encounter various problems, (including one big one) as old feuds heat to a boiling point between two species. . .(contains seduction, strong love scenes, and gore) (and just so you'll know, I'm not very good at short sum-ups so if it sounds boring just rembemer that I'm not too good at drawing people in with just a few words. . .lol)

You can write the next one but be sure to put an overly warrning so people read stuff they wouldn't want to read !

I'm trying to figure out which parts of it to put on here to make it more interesting. . .I've done fanfics before but this is my first preview.

Okay I've gotten some parts together and I HOPE this will make things a little more appealing.


Dala could see a tear in Kota's eye. She tenderly rubbed it away with her tongue and kissed him yet again. Then he got off of her and she stood up. "Let's go home." she said softly, gazing at his smiling face. He fell in beside her and they walked out of the clearing. Kota couldn't help his eyes glancing back in the direction of his former home. He'd built memories there as well, but his were spread out into years and there were much more of them. He hurriedly snuffed out these emotions, rationalizing that all those memories were worth little when compared to the few he shared with Dala. In his preoccupation he hadn't realized that he had altogether stopped. She looked back at him. "Hey, you okay?" Kota pressed his lips together and turned back to her. "Yeah, it's just that, there's a lot of memories here. . ."

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Kovu paced back and forth angrily in front of a troubled Simba. "So you just left her out there? Simba why didn't you bring her back!? You know how worried we are! Something could happen to her!" Simba calmly shook his head. "Kovu, she can take care of herself. I think you know that."
"But what about this new guy?! I don't know anything about him! What if he's one of those animals that preys on young females!?" Again Simba slowly shook his head. "She told me that he treated her well and kindly. And I already told you how she felt about him. Had you been there, Kovu, you would have understood the look on her face. It was like the look that Kiara gave me when I sent you away, of course with more realization and less remorse." Kovu gritted his teeth and looked away. "I still don't like it."
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Simba and Kota had turned back from their former course and were on their way back to Pride Rock. Upon getting there they found Kovu walking casually in their direction. Simba sensed Kota's nerves return and instructed him to keep quiet and leave the talking to him. As Kovu neared, Kota was relieved to see that he could match Kovu in size--or exceed him--and that he wasn't quite as intimidating as Simba. On first impression.


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"You're sure." The large hyena demanded, his voice impregnated with rage.
"Yes sir. I saw him. What was left, that is. No one else was in that area. It has to be him." The larger hyena quickly turned his head away and growled. "This should not have happened.
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There maybe that will make it a bit more interesting. Please let me know what ya think!

Hey them new guys look like trouble! More please lol.

I love it I can't wait to hear the rest of it, keep up the good work