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Hmm...interesting. The profanity seems misplaced somehow...and I'm not too fond of romance between Aleu and Niju. They didn't get along in the movie at all (he tried to kill her), so it's really hard for me to visualize something like this. Also, the characters' personalities didn't really fit their personalities in WQ (this is just my opinion, but why would Niju yell at Aleu, then suddenly look interested in her? You might want to change that part.)

Anyway, good luck.

It is a fanfic worth reading,Aleu is nice,but I'm not very fond of Niju.

Interesting idea, but really, that's it, sorry. Even *I* don't think the swearing is necessary. I was originally going to do a Niju+Aleu fanfic myself, but I cannot bring myself to do it, because I think a Nava+Aleu fic (which I have already started) will be better for me to write based on my own personal beliefs on their relationship. But even so I like this Aleu+Niju idea. It's different and thats what this site needs.

[Interesting idea, but really, that's it, sorry. Even *I* don't think the swearing is necessary. I was originally going to do a Niju+Aleu fanfic myself, but I cannot bring myself to do it, because I think a Nava+Aleu fic (which I have already started) will be better for me to write based on my own personal beliefs on their relationship. But even so I like this Aleu+Niju idea. It's different and thats what this site needs.]

really cat? a nava+alue fic? interesting.

sorry, cat figr out how to put it is the white box

Yeah, I think something was going on between them Maybe between Niju and Aleu as well, but DEFINATELY Nava and Aleu. Maybe people are like "ew thats sick!" But hey, it happens in eral life, both with dogs, wolves, and humans.

you go cat!