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Ok this is a fanfic i'm working on heres the info:

Title: A moment like this.

Catagory: Relationship/love

rating PG 13+

Reson for rating: Violence, love scences, incest.

Summary: This is a twist of Balto 2. Ok well Aleu is adopted and she and Kodi have fallen in love. TO hide their shame they keep the love out of public (and the fact that their siblings). But word gets out and Aleu and Kodi try to go their seperate ways but their love it just to stong.

Teaser:
“Get down princess!” Sophie called to her dog, Aleu. Princess? Hah don’t make me laugh I’m Aleu! Aleu thought. She stood on the table and howled repeatedly. But all of the sudden she was grabbed her collar and thrown off the table.
“Gosh princess this isn’t the wild! You’re in a house for goodness sakes!” Sophie’s dad shouted.
“Sophie why don’t you take her on a walk?” The mom said.
“Ok mom.” She laughed and ran to grab the leash. Aleu rolled her eyes. Leash, I’m wild gosh dang it! She thought.
Sophie hooked the leash onto Aleu’s collar and the walked out the door. As the walked into town Aleu spotted the mail team coming in. Kodi! She thought as she wagged her tail. She tugged on the leash, yanking it out of Sophie’s hands.
“Princess!” she called. Aleu ran for Kodi, panting happily.
Kodi looked over and jumped happily at Aleu. The musher unhitched the dogs. Kodi walked with Aleu.
“Hey Aleu, that’s a pretty collar.” Kodi said with a smile.
Aleu looked at the pink collar with the gold license dangling on the front.
“Hah, thanks.” she said “So how have you been?”
“Good, hey do you want to go to the boiler room and talk?”
“No my girl is gonna get upset.” Aleu rolled her eyes “I’ll talk to you later.”

“Honestly Princess who do you think you are? Running off like that.”
Duh, a dog. Aleu thought. She was literally kicked outside.
“Stupid humans.” Aleu muttered. “I’ll go find Kodi.” She whispered and hopped the fence.
She ran to the boiler room and saw Kodi talking to Kirby.
“Ahem.” She said
They looked over. “Aleu!” Kodi smiled
He walked over and nuzzled her.
“Are you two mates?” Kirby asked. Kodi said “no” and Aleu said “yes” they both blushed.
“Ha-ha well I’ll leave you two to figure that out.” Kirby said and left the boiler room. It was just them. They exchanged glances until Kodi said.
“Come sit.”
Aleu nodded and walked over to him. She sat down next to him.
“Aleu, we can’t keep the fact that we’re not related a lie to the local dogs.” Kodi said
“But I really wish that-”
“I do too. I love you more than anything on earth but…” His voice trailed off. Did he say love? Did he feel the same way about Aleu?
“Does that mean we still can’t be together?” Aleu whined
“I don’t know. I think that it would be best that we go our separate ways.”
Aleu nodded “Ok.”
She got up and started walking away when Kodi takled her. She looked up at him.
“Are you ok with that?” He asked “Because I…” His voice trailed off. He studied his sister and soon leaned in to lick her neck. But did she still feel the same? Of course! She couldn’t get over him that quickly.

P.s. Soryy for the change in title I was listening to Kelly Clarckson while writing XD

Ooh!! This will be interesting!! Saba is finally let off of the 'incest thing' lol. Now Aleu is in it!! YAY! xD. I'll have to read this when ya get done!

Lol thanks XD also it was getting annoying how Saba was always in the incest XD I'll post more soon.

xDD. I feel so sorry for Saba when she is. lol. Ooh. MORE! YAY! lol.. I have no life. ><

Kk ^^ ill post more and thanks XD I know poor Saba. In my other fic I killed Saba and Dingo.

Aleu waited to feel him lick her. But there was a noise. Some one else was in the boiler room! There was a figure that looked like Balto. Dad! Aleu thought
“Get off of me!” She shouted and pushed him off. Kodi looked shocked. “You pervert!” She called and ran off.
She ran home and hoped that Kodi wasn’t hurt to bad. A prescious moment was waisted. I'm lucky enough to have a sud! Alue thought to herself. lets hope I didnt ruin it.

Thats all I got i'm working on it was we type XD

YAY!! Another great part!!



Which fic is that? I wanna read it. Is it on BS?

Thankies ^^ also heres the link to it http://baltosource.timduru.org/fanfic.p ... =2&nsite=1 IMO its not that good I wrote this befor I was serious about trying to be literate.

Sounds good, the story does. About the part you just added, well, I hope Kodi realized that Aleu didn't really mean that.... I mean, if she hadn't said that, then I think Kodi would have...

Write on!

thanks SOTW ^^ heres another teaser

That night Kodi dreamt of Aleu, He thought of her and pictured them together with pups. He was obsessed. He lay on the carpet in the living room of his human pup’s home.
“Doesn’t she love me?” Kodi asked himself. Doesn’t she feel the same way I feel about her? What was with the sudden pervert outburst? He began to think. Questions zoomed in and out of his mind until he started falling asleep. Tomorrow is Saturday, I don’t deliver the mail. I can see Aleu then.
He fell asleep silently.

****
Aleu barked at an owl that sat on a tree hanging over their yard. The owl taunted her with it’s hoots witch ticked Aleu off. She growled and barked but it was no use. Sophie’s dad came out and hit her with the newspaper.
“Knock it off!” He said in a soft yell and stomped back inside. Aleu gritted her teeth at the owl but relaxed at the thought of Kodi.
The lay down and sighed while thinking over her forbidden love, Kodi. What if Aleu ended up with pups? Her parents would ask who the lucky guy was. Tomorrow she’ll talk to Kodi about confessing to their parents.

Ooh!! It's getting even better! I can't wait for the finished fic.

thanks here's another teaser XD

Aleu walked to Balto’s boat. She and Kodi both agreed that he would tell their mom and she would tell their dad. She walked up and onto the boat.
“Dad?”
“Aleu?” Balto said while walking out. He smiled and nuzzled her. “What is it?”
Aleu took a step back and prepared herself. When they were pups Balto had told them how loving the same gender of a family member was bad and he never wanted to see it come from his pups.
Just tell him! You can do it.
“Dad, Kodi and I are-uh-mates.” She gulped. Balto’s expression turned to anger.
“Your brother?!”
Aleu nodded slowly.
“How could you do this!? Didn’t I teach you right from wrong?!?!”
“”Poppa I-”
“Don’t give me excuses!” He shouted and turned away “Were did I go wrong?”
Aleu’s eyes fogged with tears. She jumped from the low part of the boat and ran away.

Poor Aleu. So missunderstood by her father. Ooh. New title. ^^ I like this one!

Alright woflhound, first they're doing gay fics, now they're doing inbreeding. I'm not gonna yell, I'm going to state my case and then let others mull over it. I don't know why you guys are doing this kind of stuff. . .although inbreeding does happen with dogs. . .it still just seems wrong to me. If it were about plain dog inbreeding, that would be fine, but with every Balto fic, the writer puts a soul and a personality to the character, making it basically a human. and that's where it bothers me. I want to you know that I don't approve of this fic, (I don't expect you to take it off) but I'm not gonna yell, I already did enough of that on cat's topic. I am however stating my view on it.

Teal you could have PMed Wolfhound instead of brining this here.


Wolfhound--> Don't pay any attention. I love these fics even if they are contriversial. Contriversail fics are sometimes the best there is!! ^^

This is very eye-poppingly fantastic,please do continue on with the story......Kodi+Aleu?,Ooooooooooh........