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Does my teaser "hook" you in to read more?
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 Post subject: War of the Worlds: Teaser
PostPosted: Fri Sep 08, 2006 8:50 pm 
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This is a teaser for my upcoming fanfic War of the Worlds . Now, I know what you are all thinking, "it's gonna be about aliens! This site isn't about aliens!" Well, guess what? It's not that kind of worlds, it's like,.. oh well.. you'll see. :wink:
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The day was bleak, and suffacating of heat. There was the slighest bit of wind, but it wasn't to cool them down, it only made them hotter.
Tasha growled and peered through the sunlight, "This is heck on earth! It's never this hot!"
Bryan smirked, then looked up at the sky. "That's odd Tasha, it's all brown.."
Tasha looked up as well and stopped walking, "It's a sign Bryan. The end has come. They will destroy us. Our own kind."
Bryan chuckled, "Yeah, whatever Tasha. Keep your superstitious life out of mine. And what do you mean by, they?" He was beginning to get scared by her ominous words.
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Hope you liked this teaser. I know it's short, but I didn't want to spoil anything. It may seem like it's going to be about aliens after all, but it isn't, you will see.

Please give me all your comments on my writing! No harsh criticism though! :)


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This sounds cool! short if you have to! Keep it going just well for me make the chapter you post a bit longer than you orginally had to make up for it! GREAT JOB!

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Interesting, never seen a fic like this before....good job so far

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Thank you, I'm surprised I have any comments on it at all! :lol: Oh, and Arcturus, that was just the teaser, I'll be posting the chapters of it up here. :wink:


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Ok I'll be waiting!

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