First tries with Cartoony dogs

Rainfeather · **Posted:** Mon Sep 04, 2006 11:06 am

http://baltosource.timduru.org/affArt-lang-2-nsite-1-numart-449-no-74-st-0.html

http://baltosource.timduru.org/affArt-lang-2-nsite-1-numart-449-no-72-st-0.html
Please give critique. I don't normally draw cartoony dogs, but I decided to try a new thing. SOOO....If you give critique you'll be my hero....

Kai~Wolf · **Posted:** Mon Sep 04, 2006 11:08 am

Wow those look great, you should draw more of them sometime

lobo1235 · **Posted:** Mon Sep 04, 2006 11:14 am

wow those are awsome

Silver Snow · **Posted:** Mon Sep 04, 2006 1:24 pm

Are you sure this is really your first try? :lol:

wow they're pretty good *clicks to favorites*

Rainfeather · **Posted:** Mon Sep 04, 2006 1:26 pm

Thanks for the kind comments everyone. However, I still need someone to be my hero and give meh some critique...

UKthewhitewolf · **Posted:** Mon Sep 04, 2006 1:45 pm

UK at your service, they both look really good except on the first one the muzzle is a bit too short and the bottom jaw looks odd and you need to add a tiny bit more detail on the ears and you could make the fur around the ears 'fluffier', make the lines more curved and have less tufts but longer.
The second pic looks perfect though.

Rainfeather · **Posted:** Mon Sep 04, 2006 1:49 pm

UK is my new hero! Thank you so much for the critique. I will try again and send more in soon!

Oh and what do you mean by 'make the lines more curved and have less tufts but longer. ' Longer what? Sorry I'm somewhat dense today...

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First tries with Cartoony dogs