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From 075 productions sorry I like having name though I'm not big. Well this is another story I have thought up of no realation to Balto at all, but it's around the same time period Balto will never be in the story! Well when I mean around it's 1876. Just to make that clear. The story is not yet done I guess this is a teaser or a sample of the story. The story doesn't really reach it's plot, so you know. The total plot is mainly about a wolf and a dog, paird up, The wolf tried to make it work with the dog, others hate it. It cost the wolf his pack, and the dogs of the town hate him. So far I know you think this story is unorginal, or a very happy one. So basicly they get together and have to set on a new life, either alone, but there going to try to get into a pack. So you know that's is not in this teaser or part thing it doesn't really leave off anything so, it's not much of a treaser. If you do like this story this might drive you back or think it's odd or bad, it's not going to be a very happy one.



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Etch dared to look back his was bitten and bleeding in many places, no… the dogs of the town chased him out. He had just gotten safe he thought about fighting his way in but it turned to be no use. True…I have to try again! The words came back to his mind ‘If you return she’ll be sentenced to death. This isn’t fair! I couldn’t say goodbye even. Etch could feel his eyes burn with tears, “Now I’ve lost two…why? Why? Why is that wolves aren’t…oh True…I’m so sorry True just…” Etch fell on the ground in defeat.

Etch keen ears caught the sound again. Etch turned around through the bushes a wolf came out bleeding on his mussel. “I’m going to rip out your throat little trader.” Etch got to his paws and started running as fast as he could which wasn’t much in his condition. He put his back against a tree in hopes of not being found. The voice shouted in his ear, “Come here!” Etch started running again the wolf wasn’t far behind him. The wolf was going to catch him. I can’t die here, True. Wolf no! Etch turned around to face the wolf.

“Back off, Ogden!” he shouted the name of his older brother. His brother didn’t seem to hear him, “Look I know what I’ve done is wrong but I love her, love her more than life it self! I’d die for her please let it go.”

“I’ll let you go once your dead, with the tramp you chose with!” Etch knew talking was now no use. Someone please help. Please…I have to see her I have to see her one last time, “Ogden please don’t!” Etch screamed. “I told you when I let it go.” Etch felt himself thrown to the ground. Etch saw himself hit the ground. He yelped in pain. “Someone please…” Etch screamed in pain as he felt his ankle bitten into by his brother. He felt himself being dragged before seeing everything go to blur, as he was twisted around. Etch felt his head hit something. Etch screamed but no sound left his mouth. He felt the snow as if it were a thousand daggers stabbing into him. Etch could feel himself shaking. Etch heard his brothers growling in his ears, his heart pounded in his ears. Etch raised a paw to stand put the paw was hit down. “Tr…True……” Etch mumbled. Etch felt the back of is head throbbing with pain as if his heart was pumping the pain there. Etch saw the blood stained snow turn to a blur of dotes with some color. His eyes worked hard to see clearly. Etch felt a warm paw on his throat slam down. Etch could breath. Etch tried to get his feet up. The life giving air was gone. His body and mind screamed for him to get air to live. His head started to feel light. Etch struggled more desperately. His tail moved about wildly as his entire body worked to get air. To move out of the way to breath, Etch moved his throat to breath but nothing seemed to be work. The suffocating embrace stole him way. Etch started to tire, as he earning for air seem to increase. Etch’s wild movement started to slow only his left back leg twitch, but it too stopped. His tail twitching was the only sign of life left it was slowing down. His eyes became dilated. His tail twitched ever so slowly. Etch heard some sort of roar. Etch felt the wait lift from his throat, Etch gasped for air the life giving air seemed like fire in his lungs it hurt to breath. Etch felt his headache grow worse. Etch continued to gasping air. Etch the air was too much for him. Etch coughed over and over. His body kept making breath the air that seems to be fire to lungs. He just couldn’t bare it. He coughed again. His throat burned with a burning rage. The air was so painful to breath he didn’t how he was still alive from the fiery air.

Etch looked up he tried to hardest to clear his vision, as it cleared. He smiled with all his heart he could see his beloved True. “True..!” Etch could barely walk over to her the time it took to reach her seemed to be years. True had some blood on her mouth. “Etch.” She sobbed. “I thought I lost you.” Etch was in his own tears, “I thought I did too, I thought I lost my self.” His chest still screamed with a burning pain. They braced each other. “Where you come?” Etch asked sounding very worried. “I’m fine, and safe with you. Behind that tree.” Etch fell on her. “Etch!” Etch breathed heavily “I’m fine. No…you have to go back. I can’t see you again nor can you see me that’s what the law.” True smiled lovingly, “That’s the law of the town, I love your idea, the law isn’t for me.” Etch slowly smiled, as he knew what she meant. “But, what about.” True helped him to stand with him leaning on her it didn’t last long. He fell over almost instantly. “You literally can’t live without me can you?” Etch half-smiled, “See I told you. What about you?” Etch asked. “Not a second.” Etch slightly shook his head, “That I already know, I meant what about you? Your life there your ready to just to leave it? Everything you knew, you’re a sled dog. How could you just…?” True could feel more of his weight fall on her. “Etch, first you can’t last the night with out me, look at yourself I have to say your really heavy.” True took a breath, “I’m ready to throw everything away to be with you. I pretty much agreed with you. That was when I told you myself I was ready to leave everything I thought at first we could just be on the low, but as you see.” True made a small laugh. “You gave up everything to be with me, it’s only fair if I do the same.” Etch tried to stand better so she didn’t have to hold his most of his weight. The air had now slowly turned cold and easy to the way it was supposed to be. “No you shouldn’t have to-” True cut him off, “It’s always you shouldn’t you shouldn’t with me, it’s like I get everything with out giving anything back. As you said before you can get with out giving first.” Etch frowned as he cried, “But…but you aren’t supposed to give anything, you shouldn’t have I was.” True smiled as she licked his ear. “The world isn’t perfect, you know that, I love you and that’s all that matters to me, and to be with you is greater than anything in the world.” Etch took, “Look what I’ve done, to you to my own kin I’ve ruined everything to them.” True smiled, “Was it worth it?” Etch paused, “The more your willing to give up the greater the prize.” True shook his head, “I’m no prize.” Etch stood up best he could he still needed to lean on her to stand. “You’re no prize alright no trophy your more than a wonder of the world that was just a saying your unable to manage in words love just seems to be too short of word it can’t describe how a feel about you it’s far, far too weak of a word to tell how I feel about you it just doesn’t tell enough…and never will be.” True smiled, “Same here.” True paused, “We need to get out of here.” Etch smiled, “Heh you know joining a pack alone is hard and danger and with you, I don’t want to risk it but I don’t…” Etch looked at her, True smiled she was slightly smaller than him, “I know we can do it.”

Keeping going? Well there is more I just wanted to know if this is worth writing, the readers rule the writers so people tell me what you think any suggestions or comments on this? Or do you visit wrong click leave, or go that nice and leave, well to everyone How is it?