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 Post subject: Practice, practice...not enough?
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Ok, so I've been practicing with Paint Shop Pro X and it seems to be working but I'd love everyones opinion on these two pics...

Pic #1> http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/39087673/

Pic #2> http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/39087895/

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it looks REALLY GOOD :shock: wow! it looks film worthy!

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those are good pics

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Those look great UK and the backgrounds are starting to look a little better than before

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Awsome pics Uk! :D

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Thanx guys, I dunno whether I like them or not but ah well, hehe, thank you Lilo.

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yourwelcome^^ I'ts the truth they are VERY,VERY,VERY! GOOD! keep it up^^

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I love these pictures! They look so life like! Keep up the good work UK :D

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Whitewolf(uk) wrote:
Thanx guys, I dunno whether I like them or not but ah well, hehe, thank you Lilo.

welcomes :D

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Proportion wise, your characters are perfect. They could use more detail in the fur, but the shading is in all the right spots.

The background seems flat; needs more depth like darker shading in the far off sky (not sure how to explain it) But otherwise great work!

I wish I had a useful CG program. MS Paint sucks.


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UK. You are asking for criticizum (sp?) and here I bring it. I am not saying I would be any better than you, but here it is. Yes, indeed, it looks better, yet I see to much reseblance. I am sorry, but I am one to NEVER use one picture of a charrie for another charrie.

Yes, once I did the picture of Delilah with a different color pelt, but it was still Delilah. I really do disapprove of that myself. I can't stand when someone uses one charrie base as another charrie.

And your backrounds, they look nice, yet so very much the same. They seem blane (sp?). I dont mean to be heartless, or anything, but they do. To much alikeness. Work on different backrounds alittle but otherwise it is good. =D

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Yippee, thankies maya, I'm still getting to grips with doing backgrounds, I dunno how to create grass :? but I'm hoping to get Photoshop and a tablet fairly soon so that should help.

I' not sure quite what you mean about using one pic of a charrie for another one...if ya mean coz they're both night time pics that's because I love night time pics...I dunno why though....

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Whitewolf(uk) wrote:
I' not sure quite what you mean about using one pic of a charrie for another one...if ya mean coz they're both night time pics that's because I love night time pics...I dunno why though....


What I mean is like this. I will show you an example. ^_^ Here:

http://img235.imageshack.us/img235/9161/foruk11ub3.png

For UK only ^_^

There you are, that is what I ment. It is the same base, only diff colors for diff charries. ^_^

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Which pic was like that? I did'nt know I'd done that...

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Whitewolf(uk) wrote:
Which pic was like that? I did'nt know I'd done that...


I didn't say you did, but your backrounds where very similar...


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