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 Post subject: I really need critique!!!
PostPosted: Sun Aug 27, 2006 9:16 pm 
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Ok, so I tried editing one of my pics fully in Paint Shop Pro X today and I ould really appreciate everyones view on it, I know it's not all that great but I'm a complete amateur at this kinda thing so...critique away.

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I don't usually go to DA, but since it's your art...

I think you did a fantastic job for your first time^^


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Very nice job, especially for one of your first. *I* can't use PS (cuz I dont have it) But of course you're not going to be perfect your first try. But next time, study the texture of the snow around you, maybe that'll help ;D


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I don't see nothing worng with it?
I really like you Balto-your style :) It's great;)
And I agree with Cat lol.When you'll draw again snow,try to make the shading of the character lol. and the shdow of it on the snow,to look more "real"

But it's a great pic White UK :P

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This is pretty good. I like it really. First try? Even better. Good job UK!


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I think it's cool for your first try. I like your style by the way. But like Deni said you should make the snow a bit more "real". But for your first try, it's very nice.


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Great job for your first try

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It's very good for your first try. What I found helpful was just to experiment with the editing program you have and just do a ton of little sketches of snow, fur, shading, poses, etc. It really helps, at least it did with me.

Very nice job

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Tiz good White.Good job keep up the good work.:)

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Thanks for the comments guys and thanks for the tips too, I'll practice with the snow a bit more and the shading, thankies. :D

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