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Title:The War For Love and Life

Category:Relationship/love or Character development

Rating: rated R

Reson for rating:
Strong love sences and Violence.

Summery:
This is about a German Shepherd name Drake. Drake is an x-fighting dog and is now up for breeding. Every weak he is bred with another dog. Why? Because it brings his master great sums of money from people who want their dog to breed with a fighting dog.. Drake is abused and neglected.
In the begining of the story a female husky saves him from death. He wants to repay her some way and some how but her request is against Drake's wishes.

NOTE: Please remember that i'm NOT severly perverted. This fic is based on what a real dog might do and probaly wont be out for a while.

thanks Here's a teaser. Its not that bad now.

“Get up you poor excuse for a dog!” A human hit me with a broken pipe. “C’mon get up!” He repeatedly kicked me. I struggled to my four paws and looked up at my owner. His face was bitter and angry. He took the cigarette from his mouth and pressed the hot end on my snout while scratching his 5 o’clock shadow.
He repeatedly twisted the cigarette butt on my muzzle until it was put out and tied a rope around my scrawny neck. As we walked upstairs and out to the back yard I thought of what I did wrong to deserve this life. I was only one German shepherd with one huge sin weighing on my shoulders. That was probably why I got this life.
While the master tied me to a post he grumbled about how useless I was. He went back inside to either drink or smoke. I heard cawing each caw got closer and closer. Soon crows were pecking at me. I fought them but it was no use they kept coming. I killed a few crows but they seemed endless.
I was just about to give up when a beautiful slender brown and cream husky jumped over the wooden fence and chased off the crows. My ears shot forward. I opened my jaws to talk but she was scared away by my master who came barging out the door with the metal pipe clenched in his hands.
He took the rope and dragged me inside. I looked and fought back to see if she would come back over that fence.
“I have a treat for you Drake.” The man said. I couldn’t believe he said that. I have never gotten a treat from him before. He took me upstairs and into a room with a female dog.
“Have fun.” He said and shut the door. The pervert. I thought to myself.
The female dog walked up to me slowly and smiled coyly.
“Hello, Drake.” She laughed. She was a pure bred Border collie. She was skinny, dainty, and very pretty any male dog would want her but not me. My mind was set on that husky.
I gulped and backed into the corner but that didn’t stop her, she just kept her skinny legs and small paws moving towards me. Soon enough she was standing really close to me. Her nose touched mine. I became relaxed and slid under her. She smiled at me and backed up a tad bit but remained standing over me. She laughed and smiled. Then began licking my muzzle.
“Wait!” I exclaimed and got up.
“What?” She demanded
“Don’t you think we should know each other a little more?” I stalled.
“Don’t be silly.” She snickered and pined me down.
“But, if you really think so.” She licked my muzzle. “I’m Bell.”

Thanks ^^ I dont know when it will be done i'm planning on this being kinda epic.

Sounds cool for start, would like to read it up.

When does it come out? You got time line for it?
Well anyway, some grammar errors (I have thousands of em always)
Like weak and week mixed up. Well big deal 'bout it I can read it and understand even better if it isn't total English

i'm aiming for some time next weak. But about the grammar exspect mixed up words i'm dyslexic. As for the spelling I dont have spell check. XD BTW thanks

I suggest you get Office it has spell check, Suggest it, Wordpad is awful, I wrote 3 first fanfics with it and horrible mess came up with 'em o.o. Anyway hava good one with this story. Those kind of ones always get's me halfly interested

Thanks also I hate typo's they suck anyway i'm gonna get back to the fic XD.

This sounds really good, I like the teaser, I'll defiantely read it when it's done.

Thankies ^^

cOOL!!!!!!! I this sounds cool. The poor guy, with actions how will he now true love or not, he's been just oh dear I want see the rest of this it's was bold it would be hard to work with, but you got it though if it was box office 100 million, in sales but that's not how it works though go for it!!!! KEEP GOING!

thanks here's another teaser ^^,

The next morning I managed to sneak out. I ran none stop to the meadow. When I was there I heard two voices a male’s and a female’s. I darted towards the noises to see the brown and cream husky and another male dog.
“Get off of me!” The husky snarled
“Oh, c’mon.” The male dog said as he tried to get onto her. I snarled and ran for the male dog. I jumped at him with my jaws wide open.
“What the f-” the male dog started but before he could Finnish we collided. I snapped at his thought and he snapped at mine. I drew my head back quickly and snarled. He bit my leg as I tried backing off of him. His grip was strong. I could feel the blood drain out of me like I was a bath tub.
I bit his abdomen and pulled my head back. Blood splattered over the lush grass. Then I bit on his muzzle and pressed my front paw on his stomach. I could feel him trying to cough. After 4 or 5 coughs blood splattered out of his mouth and all over me.
As I spat the blood out and onto the grass he struggled to his paws but never made it up. His legs shook and he repeatedly fell. After a while he gave up and died.
I turned my head and looked at the husky. Her jaws were wide open in shock. I folded my ears, lowered my head and began walked past her not even glancing towards her direction.
She ran in front of me and started into my eyes for a second. She then nuzzled me. Confused I went along with it. I could feel her wet tears on my chest.
“Thank you.” She sniffed in-between tears.
She took me to a spot with really tall grass. She lay down and I laid beside her. I also learned her name it was poppy.
“Why are you all the way over there?” She asked
I shrugged “I didn’t want to crowd you.”
“You won’t.” She said softly with a look in her eyes that Drake always feared. He crept over to her and rested my head over her protectively. I licked her ear for a while. Soon we both fell asleep.

Nice nice nice, bit typo like. Finnish and finish are completely different words. Finnish=Language finish is to end. finish line and so on otherwise readable, small rush I noticed, take your time while writing, it isn't speed limit that 'faster and faster' just slow down and pick up details and stuff and good comes

Teasers....Why! Teasers make you wait I don't want to wait, but teasers also get them hooked. Next part soon I hope. Keep going!

Hey wolfhound this looks like it's gonna be gooood when are you gonna be done with it???!!