It sucks in my opinion. here is the chorous, it's prety long and i don't feel like writing it down. That's just the chorous. Please tell me what you think.
Broken
Baby I'm broken
Without you
Everything thing
that we used to do
Oh, can you see
I'm so broken without your love
Yeah, yeah, yeah
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Well, even if you're only posting the chorus, I like it.
You really should post the whole thing. That would turn some heads, I think.
But anyone who can or will write a song is a winner to me.
Rock on.
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