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I told befoe I won't read this sorry, but it's your choice you said I don't care what people say so do what you want I'll use a qoute for you from steven the dircter of great movies this one is from Jaws what he had to about the ending when the writers and everyone said it wasn't going to work, "I don't care! I have them for two hours I'll make them believe what ever I want them to believe, for the next three minutes!" That's what gets to be great do it your way! Though I won't read it. Make it great for you and those who want to see it done!

Well, I'd have to say it's really up to you whether you put it in or not, so I'll vote 'If you want to.'
However, should you decide to put 'that' scene in, I must politely request that you set reasonable boundaries for the descriptive element of 'that' scene.
Since this story, like all others sent here, will be read by a fanfic moderator like myself, one of us will let you know if for some reason it's not accepted.
Just don't forget to at least put a warning in the summary, and rate your fic accordingly.
Tred carefully and think likewise. Good luck.

-LWf

its your fanfic, so you decide, i mean its not really up to us, its not our story, but, like you say, this is a kids site, so i would advise that you put a warning at the beginning, just so people know what to expect.

...I just have a few things to say. First of all, I don't know how this whole Kodi+Kirby idea came to be, but I don't like stories like this, so you can take my word for it that I'm NOT going to read this story. I'd hate to disappoint you, but I don't think it's very appropriate for a kid's site. But, if you're going to write it, go ahead. I'll let you choose the rating, but at least put a warning so that people will know what the story contains.

EDIT: I hope you don't take this offensively, I was only saying what I thought. Good luck with your fic though.