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Here are some parts.

Chapter one

"Good morning cala!"I yelled through the front door of their dog house.
"oh lobo,stop i want to sleep!"
("I don't tell the story through the rest of the fic.")
"Come on cala there is bacon inside your owners house."Cala sniffed and perked her ears up and said"show me!"Like she was some brat or something.
"Well as we went inside the house we saw Conner and Daisy and their other pups." "where is the bacon?!" Cala demanded to know.She sat there wimpering and crying because there was no bacon."So Cala and I went outside to get some fresh air and we saw something in the dumpster.It was.....

So what do you think?

This sounds interesting I'd love to hear the rest of it!

thank you i am working on it now

good start lobo, i read your other fan fic to you did great on that one

thank you and ok

Nice job so far. ^^

thanks