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Okay, if you're wondering why I've made so many fics and never finished them, it's because I'm so caught up in school and is driving me crazy. But this one, I will finish here. It's about Storm and Stan, my two love struck characters. This story has to do with how they met, lived, and got separated after Storm was 8 months. This song by Rascal Flatts goes graet with this fic. It inspired me to do it too!

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=TYbEPYjHYTw

Well, I don't want to spoil it, so I'll be typing the story!^^

Part 1:

It was a beautiful spring day as a mother wolf gave birth to five beautiful puppies. All of them with snow white coats, but one was almost completely pale. Her sisters were white as well, but had more black and brown. The mother, was all black with bright yellow eyes. She was the alpha female of the pack, and her father was the alpha male. He too, was all black, but has white socks on all fours. The mother laid in her den with Storm, and her sisters beside her. Another female gave birth to two male pups, one of them was Stan. He was black with a stocking on his front righ paw, and socks on all the other feet. His chest and belly were white as well, with a small patch of white on the top of his muzzel. He squealed as her searched for his mother's warm body.

A month later, the alpha male came into his mate's den, where Storm and her sisters stayed. He was shocked to see them all white.

"You'll have to get rid of them." He demanded.

"But they'er your children! It shouldn't matter if they're white or not!" The mother pleaded. The male shook his head.

"They all have to leave the pack in 7 months." He ordered before he stormed out of the den. The mother felt a warm tear roll down her cheek, as Storm came and leaned on her mother's leg. She smiled and wagged her puppy tail. The mother smiled back, trying to look happy, but the sadness overwelmed her soul.

More to come later!

That was awesome dude! Thumbs up all the way!

awsome!!!

WOAH!This rocks! (I luv storm.)^^

thankies everyone!^^

Wow dude, Awsomeness! ^^ Great job!

thankies wolfhound!^^ this has nothing to do with the 5 sisters, this was before i came up with the sisters. I put the five sisters together, but i only talk about Storm and Stan in this one. I will make a fic that has all 5 sisters on an adventure or something later

Ok ^^ also I thought there were four sisters But anyway i'm so gonna read this fic!

A small teaser for the rest of part one.^^

The mother got the pups ready for the night, and fell asleep. She loved her pups, she just wished that her mate would've been the same, no matter what color their pelt was.

The sun rose as the sarts fadded, and a new day was born. Storm was outside, playing with Stan.

"So, what do you wanna do today Stan?" She asked, wagging her tail.

"I don't know, how about tag?" Stan suggested.

"Sounds like fun! Let's do it!"

"Okay, I'll be it." He then turned around with his paws over his eyes and started counting. "one, two, three, four..."

Storm had to find a place to hide, so then she would have a chance to dodge him before he tags her. She got behind a huge tree and watched Stan's every move. Her ear twitched, and tshe looked behind her, and she gasped. THe father was starring at her. She pinned back her ears and lowered her body, to show submission. He then huffed and continued walking by. She sighed and realized Stan was gone from where he was counting.

"Got ya!" He shouted and tagged Stom on her shoulder.

"Heh, you found me." Storm replied. She wondered why the alpha male treated her like that. He was her father, but why?

OOh! Your teaser teases me so much! Ugh!!

heh, well i think i can do a little better than that...

Psh, its still great. *claps paws*

Wow, you've captured my attention on this one. Esspecially because I love that song!
It looks great so far, please keep writing!

-LWf

GenerallY I HATE TEASERS! One because they make you wait when you get them into it. and you cut us off! That's mean, but keep this going want to read the rest Grrrr. teasers but I Love teasers too, so I like reading them knowning it's going to end but then-you cut it off, the teaser left you in midsentence. That's cruel Finsh it! But take your time, rushing a story makes it worse.

i know how you feel Arcturus... i hate them too, it's just i don't have a whole lot of time to type the whole story because of school, and a limited time on the computer. anyway, back to the fic!
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Storm smiled to Stan as he chased his tail.

"Hey Stan? Do you thin that my dad will ever love me?" She asked, with her head lowered.

Stan paused. "I don't know. He should." He smiled and licked her cheek. Storm giggled and licked him back. Stan had always cheered her up whenever she was down in the dumps. Storm and Stan were the perfect couple, and loved eachother's company. Every morning when Storm woke up, Stan would be waiting at her den's entrance.

A few more hours passed, and nightfall had approached. Storm went to her mother's den, and so did Stan with his mother. Storm curled up right beside her mother's muzzel, and licked her. He mother smiled and licked her back, but almost bursted out crying. She couldn't believe that her mate said that to his ouwn children.

"Goodnight my little angels. Sweet dreams." The mother praised, and positioned her head on her paws. Storm tossed and turned at night, the thought of her father always rejecting her, and hurting her.

A few more months passed, and Storm was 7 months old. Stan had turned 8 months also. The day has come. Her father came out of his den and marched out beside a large opening in the trees. He waited for Storm and her sisters to follow behind their mother. The rest of her sisters wre ready to go, and so was Strom.

"7 months ago, these pups were born, and now they must leave." Storm's father orderd. The pack members gathered up behind the pups and the opening of the trees, to watch what was happening. Storm's mother way balling, and fell to the ground with her paws over her head.

"Why?! Whay does it have to be your children!?" The pups' mother shouted, but the father just ignored, and waited for the pups to position themselves in different directions.

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the rest, will be continued.^^