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All the dogs of Nome are gathered at the town gate. A certian being is returning after a year absence.

" I can't believe he's really coming back." Balto said with a serious look.
Jenna sat beside him " Don't worry, I don' t think that he's going to cause you any more problems." Jenna said lovingly. They have been inseperable the past year. "He's so malicious, so evil, so violent, so-" " He's a really bad dog!" Star saig cutting Kaltag off. But before Kaltag could hit Star, a truck came through Nome's pass. The dogs followed it to a house. They sat on the other side of the street. The truck door opened and a man and woman stepped out. He then opened the back of the truck and began moving things into the house. Then out jumped 7 dogs.

"I cannot BELIEVE he made us ride back there! There wasn't enough room for all that furniture let alone your fat ***! "a golden male dog yelled. He was a little bigger than Balto with brown eyes, and white paws. " Look I didn't MEAN to fall on you but a dog of your size should be able to cope." A brown and white dog said. He had blue eyes. his ears were back." Will you both just shut up!? before i sit on both of you." A black and silver female said, she has 1 eye of each color. she was young but appeared to be the oldest in the group. "shut up."the gold male said getting in her face. " You want to fight?" the female said growling. " I wouldn't want to harm a lady of your years." the male said smirking. "Just don't kill each other, please." A blonde and white female said, in carcasm. she walked over and sat on the porch next to the other male. Kaltag stared at the blonde female" I have to see this girl!" he thought. "Don't be mean." a small female said. she was a bit smaller than star with blue eyes. "All of you should just shut the hell up." A red and white female with blue eyes growled. She caught Jenna's attention, it was her sister. "Sis!" Jenna immediaty started to run over. The female looked at her and smiled "this is new" she said walking over, when out of nowhere an evil looking Steele jumped in the way. Jenna was shocked Steele had almost bit her face. Balto and the other dogs ran over, Balto in front, and Steele's team ran at them fangs bared and ready to kill... the next section coming soon!

In the next section you will learn

what happened to Steele's team
who the new dogs are
you will meet Jenna's sister
Learn some back history of Jenna's
Jenna starts her dramatic change from innocent to... not telling yet

wow I can't wait to read the next part...good fanfic

thanks it will be up in the next few days!

Your story is very interesting. I always love stories where there's fighting and memories from the past - not to mention characters from the past. I really can't wait to read more. By the way, I'm looking for people to read my work, and enjoy and darn good story too. Here's the link if you're interested. http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3016415/1/
By the way, do you have any other stories? I would love to read them if you do?

Oh no! what are doing?! Your unpredictable no! what do mean new dogs Jenna changing what are you planing.. You evil, little mind! Love your stories!

Next Part!

The dogs halted behind Steele. Balto then stopped along with the other dogs." Hold on Steele, we don't want to fight. " Balto said looking at Steele. Jenna's sister then caught Balto's scent. She instantly knew he was a hybrid. She looked at Balto, with her fangs bared and a menacing look on her face that made the other dogs look away in terror. Balto continued " were just here to give a summons for you and you team to come to the boiler room for your end trial. " Jenna's eyes were fixed on her sister. She remembered that look. It was similar to the one that she was given when they were pups...

" Hey you can't do that! " Tylan yelled. He was a black and tan Akita pup.
" you wan't to come over here and say that dummy?!" Jenna's sister growled. " that's his bone sis, give it back. " Jenna said running over. " You stay out of this ya red cotton ball! " " You can't call Jenna that! " Tylan yelled running over to Jenna. Jenna's sister then ran over and hit him in the face. Tylan yelped then jumped at her and landed on her back. Jenna's sister then jumped up, did a backflip, and fell right on top of Tylan.
She then ran to Jenna and bit her paw. " Let that be a lesson to anyone who thinks they can dicipline me! " She then fixed Jenna with that blue eyed evil stare that made Jenna want to faint. " You two girls get over here!" Lola, thier mother said. she was red and silver.

sorry, my mom says i have to turn this off so i'll finnish this part later!

Oh man! It was cut in mid sentence again! no fair to her no! lol Sorry about that get it done soon

aww, it had to end mid-sentence
I think this could become A VERY good FanFic.
Don't Stop its very good

Next Part!

" Jenna! " Balto yelled in her face. He had been trying to get Jenna out of her trance. " huh? why did you yell, I'm not deaf." She said looking at him. " Are you sure? sorry. any way were going to the boiler room. come on. " Balto said. All the dogs piled into the boiler room and sat down.Balto and Doc then came to the front of the room. They then sat on two large crates. Steele and his team sat on the right wall in front. Balto's team was across from them. Doc then started to speak "We have come here today to welcome Steele and his team into Nome. Steele, you have completed your banishment time of one year in Anchorage, is that correct? " "Yes. " Steele growled. Balto then spoke up "Steele we at Nome are willing to accept you back into our society, provded that you are willing to abide by the rules and be a good citizen." " I didn't come here to be friends with you hybrid. If I had, I wouldn't have been banished in the first place." Steele ranted. Jenna was crushed, she had been hoping that they could be friends especially knowing that her sister was on the other team. Doc contiued "Steele, we understand that you are still racing, will your team introduc itself?" " I'm Ronnie." the golden male said without much intrest. "I am his sister Nerra." The blonde female said smiling. "Nerra." Kaltag said dreamily. "I'm Neko." the brown male said. " I am Meca, that's all you need to know." The black and silver female said. " My name is KIMI!" the small silver and white fmale said. " I don't see Steele putting up with her long." Balto thought. " And what about you?" Balto said to the red and white female. " My name, is Roxy." she said coldly.

In the next section...

Roxy turns her insult on Balto
Jenna gets... i'm still not telling
Kaltag turns on the charm to win over Nerra
Balto tries to get on Roxy's good side
Meca has a black dog moment with Balto
Star meets Kimi
Ronnie fights in the street

COMING SOON!

WARNING! the following Characters: Roxy, Nerra, Ronnie, Kimi, Neko, and Meca are my origional characters! DO NOT use them without permission! Anyone who does will be reported to STEET AND BANNED! That is all.

Lot's of drama...or lots of drama to come.
Keep writing

As said before lots of drama keep up the work, next part please! Sorry I like this stroy but don't rush! Keep going!

Next part!

" Very well, this meeting is over. Please feel free to stay and meet the other dogs. That is all." Doc said concluding the meeting. The other dogs began thier own conversations. Balto went off to find Jenna. " Why is that THING deciding what happens around here?" "They act like he's the boss." Roxy and Meca said talking. Just then, Jenna then made her way to her sister. Balto had already met up with her, and was waiting next to Sylvie and Dixie. "Hey sis, am I interrupting?" Jenna said nicely. "No, your okay, by the way Meca, this is my little sister, Jenna. " " Hi, i'm Meca. " " Sis, can I see you for a second, I want you to meet someone. " " Yeah, I'll be right back." Roxy said to Meca, who then walked off. " Why did she- " " Oh she always does that, walk off. She's probably going to find Kimi. " Roxy said cutting Jenna off. They went over to Sylie and Dixie. " Hi Jenna, hey Roxy. " Dixie said. " Hi. " Sylvie said. " Roxy these are my friends Sylvie and Dixie. " Jenna said. " Hi. " " Jenna? " Balto said smiling. Seeing Balto made Roxy tense. Jenna knew her sister was getting tense. But she had to try to get them to be friends somehow. " Roxy, this is Balto my mate. " " Your WHAT?!" Roxy said infuriated. Jenna droped her tail...

I'll finish this part later today, I have to get back to my state.

the next part is here... it's above me... READ IT!

NOOO!!!! Move it on! Do you enjoy making us wait?!! GRR!! Get next part up soon or hangman!!! lol

I'm Back! and yes, to some degree I do love to make you wait... Kidding! anyway the new part will be up tommorow!