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Post subject: What hurts. (A new stroy, need help) Posted: Thu Aug 17, 2006 8:35 pm |
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Joined: Thu Jun 01, 2006 4:02 am Posts: 477 Location: Washington, US
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Hi great people of the forums I stroy (what hurts) has pot up in my mind I'd like to know what you people think! This isn't one of them I'm making a fanfic! It's really not! There's more to it then that.
K It's not all the way thought out Yet charters not even complte about this one. So sorry I'm thinking and writing ideas are going incredibly slow on getting all the charters and such to work out on this one. Sorry I'm trying to get it worked out but. Times are medevil so that draws you back or cool! I hope it's cool.
Sorry I should get on with the stroy now. Now on to the stroy I will get it done some how. Well lets starts with the races. Werewolf are classic, but I'm changing it around. so Werewolf: Day Were. A werewolf that is in it's the werewolf from in the daylight only and in human from in the night. Night Were: Werewolf that is pretty much the classical Were. It is human in the day at night a Werewolf. You get it.
Now to do some explaning about the sub Were race there are two types. Day Unwere: This werewolf is mad in the day the classical werewolf that goes made and goes on a rampage to destroy everything the Unweres are usally a lot stronger than any normal Were normally by a lot the only glitch, the were is mad but when the were turns to human they don't remeber anything unless they sleep in the night as always and as in the nightmire of what they did as a Unwere so it normally drives the human mad. The Unweres are incredably hard to govern them selves and are always alone.
Night Unwere: Pretty much they you know the classics human doesn't know what they did, but some know what they did, and are aware but being Unwere are uncontrolable.
Choas Weres: These are the full 24/7 Werewolves they are born this way there own speices, Hate the unweres for there uncontrolable mind. Well I have these types for my story anyway. They are smart not ones who live in caves they have built homes little villages, will use some weaponry, but prefer there fists over weapons some do some don't.
Weres: There you have it the first types of Weres I do have. Just a note they vary some are just fur like the classic some wear cloths for armor mostly or just to look neat.
Charters for my Werewolves:
Name: Choas
Def: Choas Were, the grayish color bright green eyes, wears cloths k, gray clothing I'll let you guys have it look what you want! ^^.
Personality: Serious, cares for others not humans or Unweres or Liweres.
Backround: Choas is the army leader, of the biggest Choas Weres, unmated, no adoubted childern. About 313 years old to Choas weres age to human 30. Basicly one hundred years is ten years to the weres I have designed. Weapon he uses is electrical sword, right handed. I'll post how it looks soon if I get my scaner to work XD!
Name: Superin. Night Unwere.
Def: A white man, black hair black knight armor.
Personality: A real mean dude. So far of what I thought.
Backround:Like wise to Choas Leader of his great village he did become a night Unwere, but he is and alchemist (hoped spelled right) So for a backup weapon he nows how to change to a his Unwere even in the day!
Name: Grey
Def: A silver color, cloths he wears.
Personality: Friendly, wise loves his studies.
Backround: The first Were to be in a human villgae, His an alchemist, and werewizard.
Now to the Liweres a total new type of were classical but I don't think thought of yet! (I hope..) As it pretty much sounds like, Werewolf, why no Werecats! Sorry I'm getting jumpy. I called them Liweres.
Liwere frist type lionwere: Pretty much like the werewolves but are lion hope you guys can see that and the more to come. Lionweres are normally stronger than werewolves pretty much to to live. Werelions are the smallest group of the weres so natrally will be stronger, then the rest. As before I had explained, Day Lionwere, Night Lionwere, as like wise, Night unlionweres, and day unlionweres. And the chaos Lionweres!
As like wise another type of Liweres, Now as you guessed Weretigers! I hope you can see them. As before Day WereTi for short. Night wereTi. As before Day UnwereTi, and Night Unwere, with the Choas WereTi. Yes all Chaos weres are like the Chaos weres before. As the next the Mtweres aka the mt lion weres, Please see them in your mind or this is pointless! As the same Day Mtweres, Night Mtwers, Day UnMtweres, Night unMtweres, with the Choas Mtweres. Sorry I haven't gotten any soild charters yet on the Liweres.
Now, to were, were, were to much were!!! GRR! Sorry about that. now to the ones we alll loveiii! The wolves! As we now the wolves all well. No self explaning there finaly!
Name: Shinomori
Def: White mainly but black fur on his back and his paws.
personality, Headstrong, never backs down.
Backround: Had to run away from home to stop being controlled. Weapon his claws and fangs powered.
Name: Arch.
Def:Brownish fur with a blind of white fur mix.
Personality: Feels unloved or can't be loved, his past rules his actions perfers to be alone.
Backround: Lost his parents as a pup, he doesn't how they died he returned and found them dead. He was mocked a lot for his his bio. After his parents died he went west. Though just a pup he made as far as he went. He was attacked a lot he felt unexpected. His pain has something wrong with it, it too much, almost not possible. His weapons are his fangs and claws with lighting as his strongest weapon.
Name:Taygeta
Def: All white expect red fur in a band around his chest and back.
Personality: Thinks his the best, always seems to be in rage.
Backround: Hated for being a wolf raised in a human town till he killed the town with a death of count shortly after never goes easy. Weapon blood.
Another self explained, the dogs! Love dogs! Now to the charters shall we you guessed the main charters are not normal wolves or weres. I have them different. Really different but I hope you guys don't hate this for it.
Name:Regur
Def:Common mut, Dark brown fur all over.
Personality:Uncaring for self. Never wanted anything, caring.
Backround: Common outdoor dog, pet of the Grey, a Choas Were Has an interset in wolves rather than dogs. Weapon light.
Name: Cursa (Half-breed)
def. Tanish, gray half-dog.
Personality: Feels sad for himself, but always seems happy
Backround: Lived in the war sin, an area were every race was fighting, seen all his orginal friends die, with his pack, and his parents. Weapon electric frost.
That's all I have for now guys so should I get myself together and finish this one off? Or this is just stupid and I should shut up about this. Also for the good people of who will read this all thank you even visting this is makes you cool! Anyways I still don't got this nailed anywere some plot is there but I don't to tell it I want some suprises in the stroy. Also generally to every one no picky! AT ALL WHAT i'M TALKING ABOUT? Well I need more charters and plot helps! Such if you put a charter, with own bad guys and such I'll put it in! Tell me if your charter if you chose to ad on, family will be nice to have or just lone I won't mind at all if you chose to put a charter to this story. I'll do my best to stick to your charter best I can if you chose to enter I won't mind bady guys either! Happy days people! You are the rulers over this stroy almost like RP lol well thanks if you took the time to read this, if you comment thank you very MUCH! Now I say thank you again. Thanks so much!
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Post subject: Posted: Fri Aug 18, 2006 2:17 pm |
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Sounds cool Arcturus, keep going with it.
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KrazyArc075-cwp
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Post subject: Posted: Thu Aug 24, 2006 1:55 pm |
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Joined: Thu Jun 01, 2006 4:02 am Posts: 477 Location: Washington, US
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Well I’m starting but it is going to be slow I’m sorry it won’t pick up for bit. The starting Character will be Regur. The others will soon arrive. Well heres the first part!
What hurts
Act one. They’re here! Part one.
Regur rested his back against a tree; he always loved being out side. His master hadn’t been around for about two months he really didn’t mind he could find for himself. Regur knew he had been mutt a common mutt all his life. At eight weeks he was adopted by Chaos were named Grey he found it lucky. He could talk to him and he could talk back, so they could always work things out. Regur had book in front of him he had been trying to learn hard to find out how. They only time he really learned how is when Grey was teaching him how. He was sometimes was mocked by other dogs trying to learn how to read. Regur always really didn’t care he didn’t have any pride. If he had any it would be for others. He always helped others out and was fairly known to everyone. His best friend was Cursa a half-breed. Regur laughed to himself. The book him front of him was paintings of wolves. The one he was looking at was a female wolf. Grey didn’t like it when he did that. The painting might not be great for each page, but they were still wolves, he loved wolves. Cursa loved wolves from what he could see. But he never admits it! Regur laughed to himself. Regur used his noise to turn the page. To a black wolf was on the next page male a very lean. “I wish I was that lean.” Regur said to himself. “I wonder if dogs can use magic or alchemy, I mean Weres and Liweres and humans can so can dogs or wolves use them, Grey says it’s unlikely that we can do anything. Hmmm. Grey been looking at sharks lately that’s what he says. What are sharks?” Regur looked away from the book the wind caused some pages to flip. Regur shrugged as he gave up on the thought he could after all ask Grey when he got back anyway. He’ll probably have some pictures he loved it when he brought back painting it always go his mind going about the world.
Regur used his nose to close the book and bit it lightly so he could carry back. The village was fairly nice walled and it could be small trade, but to Regur it seemed it was always lit and moving. Well to him it was, it was fairly large. Regur made his way to his home though he was mainly an out door mutt. He got to the broken window in the basement. “Grey should fix that.” Regur crawled through the broken window. The basement was small gray colored the only thing Grey kept in there was his wine cellar. Which Regur thought was not that great. Regur made it to the cellar’s door to the upstairs. He carefully ran up the stairs it was dark without the candles burning. He turned to his left to Grey’s study; he made his way to his desk, he propped his paws on the desk and set the book down, and got off the desk he made he way back to the wine cellar. Regur sighed, “Grey has been gone for while.” Regur moved back up through the broken window. He headed towards the village “Ah, now lets go beg for food.” Regur made it to the village, he could see people coming and going not really caring for this dog wondering around it was fairly common. Regur was about to head in but a wagon made him stopped as passed by. Regur wagged his tail trying his best to look happy he really didn’t need to he was, but people have to have something more to show that you are. Regur made his way though the rustle and hustle of the people. One pushed him. That was nice? Regur passed it off he paused and looked around before moving around again. Don’t make it look like you your begging. Regur reminded himself, he headed over to the cooked fresh and long food place as he put it, that place what he said ‘nice cooked food.’ Regur had done this many times before. But each time different and only once a week! Or they catch on. Regur smiled to himself. Regur walked to a man getting some food. He acted like he didn’t see him and ran into him gently. The man looked down at Regur, Regur looked at the man then glanced over at his plate then back at him Regur whimpered. The man shook his head and went on with his meal. Regur whimpered more loudly this time. The man sighed and threw a piece of mouth watering cooked meat towards him. Regur let it hit the ground as if not expecting him to give any food to him. Regur went over and ate the piece of meat. Regur looked at the man again expecting a piece of meat. The man looked at him “No bad get!” Regur nudged the man with his noise. “Bad get!” The man stood Regur ran off a bit but stopped, “Get!” Regur now ran away from the man. All in a days work. Regur happily thought to himself. It wasn’t filling but it would work for now.
Regur liked when some dogs got to together but it was rare and most humans found it weird. Regur sighed it seemed now barley any dogs were together now. Most were always with there owners. Regur seemed to only talk to strays most didn’t mind to talk for moment or two but it didn’t last long. They seemed to like being alone. Regur passed around the town. There was a party soon he had over heard for some town anniversary thing. Regur the strays would probably be they’re begging, as he would be. On a normal week a few wolves would show up in town, but that was only when was Grey was around the people said if he wasn’t around the kill the wolves. Regur headed for the woods were he had been looking and trying to learn to read, it was incredibly hard all the rules were obeyed and broken it was so hard it seemed impossible but he never complained of how hard it was. Regur once again had to go though the ever-busy people as always they’d said ‘get’ or ‘beat it’ as he passed through the town. Regur finely made it to the edge of the woods he remembered as a pup he’d pass back and forth like a wolf, as a pup he wished he was one though they were commonly hunted for not any reason. This made Regur angry at times he didn’t under stand of why they killed wolves whenever they saw them. Grey once told him that the humans thought they were signs of the devil like cats and black cats. Regur didn’t like cats but respected them. Regur had done this as a pup but he still did so. He wait in the forest hopping to see a wolf, so he could admire it or at best go and talk to wolf!! The thought always got Regur going he had talked to some wolves but he wanted to talk to them not to them in a village in some party with Grey. Regur entered the forest he sniffed hoping in vain he could smell a wolf. He couldn’t smell any, Regur sighed, “Keep dreaming and one day they’ll show.” Regur said to himself. Regur made it make to the tree had been resting on before he curled up to into a ball after circling around a few times. He sighed, where was Grey? Regur just picked up a sent, it had wolf in it. Regur shot up from his position.
Ok People this next part is happening as this part is happening it's what Taygeta is doing right at this moment don't worry his about 100 miles way, from Regur it's deadly short! I have to say that, it's not what I will normally do, I like doing longer ones but the fact is I may need to edit some on Taygeta I'll have this version and then a lower rating version but I like this version more then the edited one so this is uncut on it it's my darkest one or peice of work so I'm wondering may I need to change this and edit how I do Taygeta when he kills things he hates, I know this work is not good at all, I wrote this terribly it's crappy work I don't care, I got it done fast I been mainly story thinking because I have changed the story a little I'm combaining three stories all to one.
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